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There are buckets of recent topics in need of critiques. This, on the other hand, is from 2004, and doesn't need to be dragged up!
Some people have nothing,
When all they want is something,
But they don't get anything,
Because some people have everything.
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There are buckets of recent topics in need of critiques. This, on the other hand, is from 2004, and doesn't need to be dragged up!
I agree. This is an interesting topic, and I think you could elaborate a bit. Maybe give some examples or something.
Otherwise, I think it's a great idea. It's simple, with no unnecessary flair or floweriness.
I like it, but, i think a longer version would maybe be better. Good subject choice, I also think about this.
Good work 
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I kinda like it. Its a bit short, but it puts into words precisely something I often feel. Well done. A nice little piece, very succinctly put.
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