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chemistry reactions

by APoltergeist


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chemistry reactions


i. synthesis.
my heart, your head --> meandyou
together, forever
tangled limbs
and bleeding lips.
(said kiss me harder,
you obliged all too happily.)

ii. decomposition.
meandyou --> me and you, you and me
but i lie in a grave of my own making,
while you watch, sending crumbles of dirt
to cover my body, to smother my mouth.
(no air needed, but my lips still bleed
crimson lipstick, sticky to cracked skin.)

iii. single-replacement.
youandme + Him --> youandHim + me
you've moved on,
and i can't say it doesn't hurt,
smeared with dirt, dripping carmine
on white carpet. watching you
choose Him, and leave me
in the dust.
(just another thing to cover me
from the Sun's prying light.)

iv. double-replacement.
youandHim + meandtheSun --> youandme + HimandtheSun
you came crawling back,
all ruby lips and flashing eyes,
mudstained face and scarred thighs.
you told me to hold you,
and oh how happily i obliged.
(healing the scars while i still can,
nevermind the fact you would leave me again)

v. combustion.
youandme + HimandtheSun --> nothing, anymore.
drift apart like wisps of smoke
under a gentle huff of breath,
wreathing around our heads
before whisking away, into the unknown.
(take a drag, let the world fade away
until all that is left, is a little smoke.)


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Wed May 08, 2024 4:09 am
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Semicolon says...



Hi! I'm late but-
*gasp* This poem is SO GOOD!?
I remember how nerve-racking it felt when I had to memorize all these reactions and identify which one was which and you made a poem out of it!?
This was the best thing I read today!
I loved synthesis and combustion; I actually loved the entire concept of showing chemistry between 2 people through chemistry.
I LOVED THIS SO MUCH (I hate and suck at chemistry tho)

P.S. I too turned an entire botany chapter into a poem because I couldn't memorize anything. It helps, doesn't it? xD




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Thu May 02, 2024 2:14 am
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avianwings47 says...



sigh the fact that I'm learning about the types of reactions in my chemistry class rn. (love the poem though. I love all your poems. Knowing the different reactions and equations for the reactions just makes this poem *chef's kiss*)




APoltergeist says...


i loved learning the reactions, we got to do silly little labs for them so it was really fun for an otherwise boring class
(ahh, tyy! <3 all your poetry and writing is enviable, it's soo good!! <333)



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Spearmint says...



chemical reactions and equations!! :0 aiofnhawoiefh i love this so much XD
(combustion is my fav stanza >.> it captures the evanescence of smoke and relationships so well)




APoltergeist says...


Asdfghj, thank you!! I hate chemistry so much, I made a poem out of it xD
we learned this awhile ago and it's given me brainrot ever since, so yay, poetry!! (combustion was a fun stanza to write <3 i liked the synthesis one or the double-replacement the best I think, they're funky)

now to do stoichiometry, maybe i'll finally understand it ^^"



Spearmint says...


LOL well, writing poetry on stuff you cover in class is a fun way to learn =P
yessssss i wish you the best!! (i have forgotten most of what i learned in chem XD)



APoltergeist says...


chem is the bane of my existence, the class is so frustrating but the poetry helps




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