Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
The night has come, falling from distant trees. We rain from the clouds with melodies around us, bringing us life and harmony. Everything you've wanted is right in front of you, here in this place, where your dreams can finally come true. Your heart may never be ready for the trials that you must take, but your soul and mind are waiting for a time when they can unleash their power. We wait among many for this joyous day to come, and many years may pass, and no destiny shall reveal itself to its fellow neighbors, but soon, in the dead of night, by the graves that have been still for generations, a movement shall now emerge from the land. Shaking shall be heard from the very bottom of the earth, and the still sand will start to turn into a whirlpool as the once dead now resurrect and come to life once again. But this time, their minds are changed, and their souls are not what they used to be. They may look the same, but everything is different now. There is a newfound energy inside them—a twinkle behind there eyes—and even the most dangerous people can never take them down again!
This is quite an intriguing piece that you've got here. The title already draws you in with just how unique it is. Its not often you tend to see a word like a melody go along with the idea of strength, especially to sort of be describing it, and once we actually dive into this piece it definitely lives up to that exciting promise that it pulls us in with. The environment that you manage to create here is really quite a special one, especially with that imagery toward the end.
Just the idea of how a song can energize you gets put into a scene that is far more visceral here with us seeing this literal representation of rising up from a dead state. I think that's a very cool choice that you've made there to convey this in that fashion. There's of course then also the bonus that if you dive a little bit further into what exactly this means you uncover another layer of meaning too. And for a story presented in a form this short that is incredible to just inject even more into it while it remaining this size.
Overall, a very through provoking piece for how small it happens to be an quite nicely done too!
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Kate
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