Wow is my first opinion of this. I loved reading your poem, and hearing how it flows. Your rhyming skills are incredible!! I often find myself struggling to rhyme, so it's awesome seeing someone so good at rhyming. The fact that you were able to represent themes so well within this poem is quite the trait. And the way you use words entrances the reader into this other world. Overall, I really liked this poem and the thoughts behind it, you are a wonderful writer!
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