Hi @TheRebel2007! This is a cool poem, and while I don't speak Latin, I can dissect the English of it! Let's begin! You start the poem with the title, which i like. You then say
Which is cool, & i love the space motifs!Beyond the clouds, the sky, and the moon, [we adventure]
Through aspirations, through hardships, to the stars!
You finish this stanza with:
Which is quite a lot of repetition, but it adds a nice touch!Let's search, and call into the future!
Let's reach the heights [of the sky] and the depths of the earth,
Let's dream of peace and prosperity,
Let's preach of the Love of Liberty!
the second stanza feels more somber, but lighter at the end. With lines like
it really drives the idea of making the most out of anything.[Remember, since] no one is alone under the sun,
Value Love, Life, and Liberty the most.
If i had to give a critisism, i'd say you should use more conjuctions like &, or, or so.
i really liked this though!!!!
-herbie
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