I've never heard Fat Domino's song, but I thought this was really well done. There's a nice beat to it all throughout, and it flows well. All in all, this was a cool poem to read.
You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things... — Gone With the Wind
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