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Fri Apr 29, 2005 3:33 am
Caligula's Launderette says...



I had this formatted so nicely on my computer. not such anymore. I tried my best to keep it the same. when I post my poetry, I get a lot of comments about needing spaces between words, well if there isn't a space, there's not supposed to be a space, most my poetry is e.e. cumming's style where you run words together for effect.

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don’t let me slide
further into the
a
b
y
s
s
for it suffocates my heart
and rips at my vocalcords.
whisper, while you wander here
searching for the body i no longer
inhabit
for Hades has coveted it for centuries


don’t let me slide
into His dark
embrace
just like poor Persephone
cursed
whisper, while you wander here
for only Mythos speaks in lyrictones
on his passionflute
inhibiting lust and fire
that i solicit(crave beyond even neologism)
spewing from cavernous mouths


don’t let me breathe
his zephyrind that s l e e p s in
my repose
waiting to shred my hardwon
preservation
whisper, while you wander here
for there are sirens in the midst
preying on innocent, vestal flesh (just like yours)
bestial in their endeavors
their songs beget callous destruction
not the ideal haven melodious to the
greenear

don’t let me breathe
without your help
for you are not just a soulgiver you are my messiah
steadfast
in your perceptiveness
and i am
d
r
o
w
n
i
n
g
my limbs fatigued and helpless
into the whirlpool spelled around me
don’t let me slide
unless the poor devil steals my luciferstricken erudition
whisper, while you wander here
your tourniquetlove
embracing
pieces of [my] tattered carcass
(raping me clean)
before the darkvultures pepperandprick
me
in their carnality
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Sat May 07, 2005 4:44 am
Sam says...



Wow.

Truth be told, at the beginning I had doubts about this...but...excellent. Brilliant.

That's all I have to say.
Graffiti is the most passionate form of literature there is.

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