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Inferno (13+)



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Sat Apr 09, 2005 3:53 pm
Matt Bellamy says...



I know I haven't been active in the literary forums for quite a while so after this I am going to make some comments :) This is just a poem I wrote a minute ago about how I'm feeling right now.

I don’t think I can write
Right now
Without burning the paper.
Because I’m scared and bored and waiting
And I can’t seem to
Think
Without thinking of him
I’m burning and tired and wiped out
Restless and useless and
Fucking about
I have something I need to say
And until I say it
I’m speechless.
Matt.

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Sat Apr 09, 2005 3:54 pm
Armadian says...



It was pretty good.
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Wed Apr 13, 2005 4:59 pm
Rei says...



Me like. Me like. The perfect frustration poem. Though I am rather curious about who "him" is.
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Wed Apr 13, 2005 10:26 pm
Duskglimmer says...



I like this alot. I can't really find anything that I would change about it.
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Fri Apr 15, 2005 8:38 pm
emotion_less says...



The capitalization in front of every line bugged me, but that's your style. The poem itself was hurried, yet that sets the mood of the poem. I liked it.
  





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Fri Apr 15, 2005 8:45 pm
Areida says...



I'm definitely not a poet, but I liked it too. It felt frustrated.
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Sat Apr 30, 2005 5:29 am
Sgt.Pepper says...



I liked it alot, to. The perfect " i have writers block" peom.

Because I’m scared and bored and waiting

I don't think you need the "because" there. Other than that the poem was pretty good. Keep on writing in the free world.
  








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