I'm happy
It sounds rather bland in my opinion. Something more specific, like how the narrator was happy would be better right? In poetry, I don't feel so strongly attached to the speaker because they're telling me "They're happy". I'm not a huge fan for listing emotions in poetry actually.
To the poets of YWS, do you think the "Show, Don't Tell" advice can also work for poetry too? I'd love to hear your opinions.
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