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Aley wrote:@alliyah, your challenge has been answered ^.-
I waited at the pier with my black purse
plundered by your wayward hearse adrift
among the whitecaps. A terse reminder of
all the time we spent in the blue paddle boat
in the lakes of Troy. Our feet would soak through
squishing in the purple poke-a-dot water shoes
and you complained about the orange life-vest
choking your neck, tied around your chest like a
vice. You said it would drown you best, a steel ball
tied to your ankle, and just once, I said okay
Just once that forlorn day I
let it stay at home.
Okay, so @Radrook, you need to give Alliyah a challenge and then I'll give you one right now.
Radrook your challenge is: Write a haiku dealing with the moment a butterfly hatches and make your turn be something about poisonous beauty. Or, if you'd like an easier challenge, just write a haiku but make sure it involves just a moment in time and nature.
Aley wrote:@alliyah, your challenge has been answered ^.-
I waited at the pier with my black purse
plundered by your wayward hearse adrift
among the whitecaps. A terse reminder of
all the time we spent in the blue paddle boat
in the lakes of Troy. Our feet would soak through
squishing in the purple poke-a-dot water shoes
and you complained about the orange life-vest
choking your neck, tied around your chest like a
vice. You said it would drown you best, a steel ball
tied to your ankle, and just once, I said okay
Just once that forlorn day I
let it stay at home.
Okay, so @Radrook, you need to give Alliyah a challenge and then I'll give you one right now.
Radrook your challenge is: Write a haiku dealing with the moment a butterfly hatches and make your turn be something about poisonous beauty. Or, if you'd like an easier challenge, just write a haiku but make sure it involves just a moment in time and nature.
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