I like the reviews that talk about what the writing needs to improve. Or what the person likes about tit. they didn't come here to have you yell at them about grammar, that's what schools for. and besides, when/if they publish it then they can worry about the grammar.
Teach a man to fish, he eats for a day. Don't teach a man to fish, you eat for a day. He's a grown man. Fishing's not that hard. — Ron Swanson (Parks and Rec)
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