I like the reviews that talk about what the writing needs to improve. Or what the person likes about tit. they didn't come here to have you yell at them about grammar, that's what schools for. and besides, when/if they publish it then they can worry about the grammar.
[while trapped in a bucket of popcorn] You know what the worst part is? It's not even butter. We're gonna be destroyed by... ARTIFICIAL FLAVORING! — Blake Bradley, Power Rangers Ninja Storm
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