I need a big favor from you guys. We have English model exam day after and we’ll have to write a permission letter to a company for training.
This is all that my little brain could think of; for some reason it can’t do more.
Anyway, I want you to read it, rip it apart and give me suggestions on how to write it better and a few extra points that I can add.
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Dear Sir
I, <name>, am a fourth semester student of the Department of Biotechnology of <college name>
I would like to receive training in your ‘Processing Department’ which will expose me to the professional methods as well as professional ethics. It would also allow me to apply the aspects of plant engineering technology which I’ve learnt. It would also allow me to explore my creativity in this field, as I find it to be very interesting. If within my capacity, I would like to contribute to your efforts in any little way I can.
I would grateful if you would accept me as a trainee between 01 May 2010 and 01 June 2010 which happens to be my summer break.
I thank you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully
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<name>
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Thanks!
~Lava
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