At the moment, I'm having some trouble realistically developing a relationship between my two main characters after they're first introduced to one another (both male teens). I want to make sure the (relatively swift) transition from acquaintances to friends remains believable, whilst avoiding sluggish dialogue between the characters - after all, they are meant to instantly get along... but again, it's finding the right balance I'm struggling with.
Do you have any pointers? All help is greatly appreciated!
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