I am working on a story, and I have the start plot sort of done, but I don't know how to continue it. It is first person by the way, from the view of Callum. So far the plot goes like this: A man who is named Callum awakes beside three other men. They are lying on alters made of lapis lazuli(I think the stuff looks cool), and they are wearing light cotton clothing. They are on a beach, surrounded by a thick forest, and in the distance they can see mountains. After talking, two of the others reveal themselves to be named Conner, and Jake. Connor seams strong, and angry all the time. Jake seems to dislike fighting, so naturally the two fall out. The third does not say his name, and stays quiet. Connor gets really angry at Jake, and attacks him. Callum steps in, protecting Jake. He punches Connor, which enrages him further. Connor punches Callum in the chest, and as he charges again, Callum knocks him out with a stick. Jack kanas a piece of flint on the beach and uses it to make an axe. The three then make a platform in a tree, just as sun starts to set. They lay Connor out on it, and sleep up higher in the branches. In the night, Callum wakes to the sound of three worms, five cm thick and sixty long, sliding out of a bush, making curious clicking noises. As Callum gently taps Jake on the shoulder to wake him up, the worms start convulsing. With each pulse they grew, and to their horror, the worms grow to be at head level with them. they fight the worms, connor and lewis saving them from the last worm.
This is all I have planned so far, but I would love help continuing the plot. Any feedback is welcome. Note this is fantasy.
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