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Wed Mar 03, 2010 4:58 am
MiaParamore says...



Hi all,
I have been at YWS for a while and have received many reviews for my story. Now I want to pay back by reviewing your stories. As others have specified I think I should too do that.

What I will review: :D
Any fiction but nothing rated 16+,18+ or R.
Art and Photography.

What I won't: :xd:
Any Poetry as I am too insensitive to decipher the beauty.


Just leave your link and I take atleast a day to give a good review. Hope I give you what you all want.
I will leave a note in this same thread when your work is done.
PM me for any question.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:16 am
MiaParamore says...



Please guys don't make me beg.............
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Fri Mar 05, 2010 2:40 pm
MiaParamore says...



Does no one wants 2 get dere work reviewed??? Hard 2 believe.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Fri Mar 05, 2010 3:04 pm
Rosendorn says...



Best way to get requests is to get your name out there! Review outside of requests, a lot, so people see you do good reviews. :) Requests will come once your name is established as a good critic.
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Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.





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Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:32 pm
Valentine says...



Hey, I'd like a review. Here is the link to my romance. adventure fiction story. A lot of people love it. I hope you do too. It is the first chapter, but if you chekc out the adventure/fiction section, you'll find the second one too. Thanks.

topic59698.html
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Sat Mar 06, 2010 7:22 am
MiaParamore says...



Valentine I am through with chapter 1 and would review Chapter 2 in a day or two.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Sat Mar 06, 2010 8:03 am
MiaParamore says...



Anyone else wnats to get their work reviewed.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Sun Mar 07, 2010 6:43 am
MiaParamore says...



Thanks Valentine for reviewing my work.
Last edited by MiaParamore on Thu Mar 11, 2010 4:20 am, edited 1 time in total.
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Sun Mar 07, 2010 8:17 am
Maddy says...



Hey Shubi (if that's your name :P) I would love in you could review this. It's a exert from my realistic/fantasy fiction novel i've recently edited. Thanks in advance!

post670358.html
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you!
-"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."

This awesome post bought to you by me. :)





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Wed Mar 10, 2010 9:55 am
MiaParamore says...



I will go through your story today..
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Wed Mar 10, 2010 12:56 pm
MiaParamore says...



Wanna review guys. I am free for my holidays have started. Send in your requests. i would love to review them..
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Thu Mar 11, 2010 4:21 am
MiaParamore says...



the review is done Maddy..
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore





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Fri Mar 12, 2010 2:00 am
Valentine says...



Please review this story:

topic60103.html

It is pretty popular and I hope you enjoy it. It is the fourth chapter, but you can read the others in adventure/action fiction if you want. Thanks.
"You either die a hero, or live long enough to see yourself become a villain- TDK"

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Fri Mar 12, 2010 2:02 am
Nephthys says...



Could you please review my story?

It's science fiction and 1200 words

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60055.html

Thanks :)
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Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:51 am
MiaParamore says...



Your review is done Nephthys. KEep writing!!!!
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore








One believes things because one has been conditioned to believe them.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World