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Mon Nov 25, 2013 11:34 pm
Deadman says...



6/10 Nice formatting, until the end.
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Thu Nov 28, 2013 3:32 pm
malachitear says...



7/10 because you forgot to add quotes to the last :D
The fault must partly have been in me.
The bird was not to blame for his key.

And of course there must be something wrong
In wanting to silence any song.

- A minor bird, Robert Frost


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Fri Nov 29, 2013 8:06 pm
Deadman says...



9/10 It looks much nicer than before.
"If you're going through hell, keep going."
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Sat Nov 30, 2013 1:44 pm
Zolen says...



6/10 The best quotes are ones you make yourself.
Self quoting is the key to sounding wise and all knowing.





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Sat Nov 30, 2013 3:35 pm
Deadman says...



5/10 It is so random...
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Sun Dec 01, 2013 6:13 am
Zolen says...



5/10 For being entirely made up of old people quotes.

(everything is random without context, which is why I don't like pot pie.)
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Sun Dec 01, 2013 7:05 am
Pompadour says...



7/10 because you misspelled "too" in the last one. Haha, I am such a... spelling nazi.
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Sun Dec 01, 2013 7:08 pm
Okuro says...



8/10 because of the "Sounds crazy, don't it?"
The rest is well written and beautiful but the last part kills it.
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Mon Dec 02, 2013 5:27 am
Iggy says...



10 :)
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Mon Dec 02, 2013 7:20 am
Pompadour says...



10, because I love that quote! :D
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Mon Dec 02, 2013 12:58 pm
Deadman says...



10/10 it's beautiful, like no joke at all it is an amazing statement.
"If you're going through hell, keep going."
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Mon Dec 02, 2013 3:11 pm
Okuro says...



8/10 I really like the quotes but one of them is taking away the spotlight from the others.
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Mon Dec 02, 2013 4:13 pm
Deadman says...



9/10 It holds so much truth.
"If you're going through hell, keep going."
-Winston Churchill

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Sat Dec 14, 2013 10:22 pm
turtlethatroars says...



9/10
"the beauty of words. They can be many different things to many different people. It's all in how we listen. Or how we read." - Lyrical Inspiration (authors note) of Enemies and Playmates by Darcia Helle

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Sun Dec 15, 2013 10:31 pm
TimmyJake says...



9/10 for having an awesome quote that actually pertains to writing. :P
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