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Sat Oct 29, 2005 8:23 am
Poppi says...



D+. Please re-sit.
Martyr of Banality... such a joy in life... such happiness... such a desire to just implode...
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2005 10:49 am
Twinkling Starz says...



Em, Poppi, I think he was trying to test something out. I don't think you have to reply to it.
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Sat Oct 29, 2005 3:03 pm
Poppi says...



Yeah I know. I was just kidding around.
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Sat Oct 29, 2005 3:57 pm
Emma says...



She can if she wants. If he has locked it, then you know you can't. Let her. ;)
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2005 4:16 pm
Twinkling Starz says...



Quite funny, though.

Maybe Nate posted this to see what we, as members, would do?

Experiment?
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Sat Oct 29, 2005 4:45 pm
Poppi says...



Well I think he fails. And must re-sit. Or lunchtime detention and 500 lines.
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Sat Oct 29, 2005 4:47 pm
Twinkling Starz says...



Watch it...you're insulting the admin...

Joking. ;)
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Sat Oct 29, 2005 4:50 pm
Poppi says...



The admin had obviously not revised very well!
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Sat Oct 29, 2005 4:55 pm
Twinkling Starz says...



I liked the first stanza, the TEST really opened up the poem pretty well.
And the last line was wonderful, fabulous imagery and ending to the poem.

This was so beautiful, I think I'm going to cry.
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Sat Oct 29, 2005 5:00 pm
Poppi says...



Ah I disagree completely. The admin showed misuse of punctuation, and overuse of capital letters. I also thought his vocabulary was lacking.
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Sat Oct 29, 2005 5:20 pm
Twinkling Starz says...



But it's just plain THERE.

TEST

Wonderfully spoken!
How can you say such a thing.
I cry for you, dear Poppi.
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Sat Oct 29, 2005 5:46 pm
Rincewind says...



you two have way too much time on your hands
~The bandit’s body slumped to the ground, knees hitting first,followed by the rest.His dead weight pushed dust into the air in a swirling cloud.The blood flowed from his head,splicing like river canals,delaying slightly on pebbles before flowing on through the street.~
  





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Sat Oct 29, 2005 7:07 pm
Poppi says...



Darn right you are. Life in sunny Cornwall... just lazing around... eating... wasting time... aaaaah the country loife *shooes away pet pig*
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Sat Oct 29, 2005 7:12 pm
Sophie says...



HEY!! That be MY pig!

Why you be a-theivin' at my stock??... Darn Mawganites.... *mutters to self*
Oh the trees!
Take me back to London please!!!
  








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