Young Writers Society

Hey,
I know this is random but its in the randomness section and its my job.
I am purple so I will review anything you would like, just post it here or even better PM.
I will do my best to get to it right away and start reviewing, I will do my best to help you with everything

post and PM away!

Yours Truly,
Gwenevire

Heya there! I hate asking or reviews...

But in my portfolio there's a really random sotry called 'Milkman'... appreciated review please!

Sure thing

Thanks!

No probs it will be up in a minute.

Hey,

I'd love some more crit's on How You Break My Heart. There's five chapters so far.

Here are the links:

Chapter 1 topic19607.html

Chapter 2 topic19984.html

Chapter 3 topic20986.html

Chapter 4 topic25267.html

Chapter 5 topic25970.html

Thanks Gwen.

Hey, i'd also like a crit on my poem in the Dramatic Poetry section -'A hand takes yours'

Only if you can though,

Thanks in advance,

Eimearxx

Choco: I will start reviewing your novela tomorrow

Eimear: I shall do it right away, just to warn you though... I am not to good with poetry

Alphess - part 1?

You don't have to, seeing as you're buried neck-deep in critiques now, but... *hopeful*

I have it printed out and I am going to crit it tonight and hopefully post it up tomorrow

anyone else?

Hey! How about #10 of the Immortals? That would be great if you could! Its in my portfolio...

Thanks!

Sure thing
Is it a chapter in a novela?

well, its the end of chapter four, of a novel I'm writing. It won't make a lot of sense, but opinions are always welcome!

I shall print out, read and crit all of them