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Wed Apr 04, 2007 8:33 pm
ConorR says...



DELETED! CLOSE DOWN!
Last edited by ConorR on Thu Apr 05, 2007 6:34 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Thu Apr 05, 2007 3:43 am
Jennafina says...



Do you honestly want reviews on this? If not, this is really not the right forum to post it on. I think something like this should go in your blog.

If you take your writing even a little more seriously, I'd be glad to give you a critique. For now... *points to spellchecker*

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Thu Apr 05, 2007 7:52 am
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????????????????????????????????? (What is this?)
Not getting a vibe of seriousness here. Plus it's ridiculously short and there are spelling mistakes.
  





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Thu Apr 05, 2007 7:56 pm
erin says...



yep I agree with the other two!!!!!!!!!!!!!
what are you trying to do???????????why did you post this????????
work A little harder and get more in to it and maybe you make something of it all!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everything is written in the sand but, it just depends on how you read it!
lot of love
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Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:09 pm
Snoink says...



Moved to Randomness.
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