Ok, I'm serious on art and know exactly what I'm doing here, so I'm not going to spend a whole critique going "I like it!" like I do for poetry. First off, you said you didn't like the Crysi picture. I can see why. (no insult, stay with me) it's drawn really well, but it's too faint. That's your problem. You didn't do as darker shading as you did in the others (which are absolutly wonderful, I might add). Also, the tree in the background? Space is one of the finer details of art. The most simple and bold design is the best. The tree clutters is it up far to much, so you may want to get rid of it. Don't feel as though you have to fill every space, you don't have to. Have you heard of negative shapes? If you havn't and want me to explain them to you I will.
The other pictures? I don't even have a nitpick! I really liked all of your pictures! Keep going, there're great!
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Thanx, El! Your great at critiquing! I've grown tired of all these compliments, and need the truth. I'll make sure to take u'r advice in future drawings!
Last edited by Tara on Mon Jan 31, 2005 4:22 am, edited 1 time in total.
"You can go a long way with a smile. You can go a lot farther with a smile and a gun." -Al Capone
*sigh* You know, it's kinda pathetic when I, the Dragon Keeper who is obsessed with anything having to do with dragons, can't even draw a dragon as well as Tara! And here I'm one of the better artists in my class.. Ah well. I'll work on it. Great job on everything, Tara!
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