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Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:49 pm
Matt Bellamy says...



First thing I've drawn since dropping AS level art, I guess it's a work in progress but I'd like to get some feedback. Also, inspired by a lubly guy :P
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Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:52 pm
Sam says...



That is really cool. However, if you have time I'd make her a bit taller...it looks like they have to reach a bit...:P
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Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:53 pm
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Well I am about 5"4 and he's 6"5 :P I'll bear it in mind though..
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Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:56 pm
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Oo-er, kinky. Its shweet. I'd try to put a bit more shading and tone in it though to make it even better XD!
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Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:56 pm
Emma says...



You must always have a taller man, and because then it looks cute!!

Its very good, but your downfall is how you draw them, your lines are too short...

I love the picture though...

*saves it onto my computer*

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Sat Sep 03, 2005 9:10 pm
dreaming_mouse says...



Oooooh pretty, why did you drop A level And height doesn't matter when kissing. I had a german teacher who was two inches taller then me at the most (and I'm like 5'1" and this was like two/three years ago :shock:) and he said you just need to stand on the yellow pages and let the magic happen. Although I think we could have all done without hearing how he kissed, but it shows the yellow pages have a good use.
  





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Sat Sep 03, 2005 10:09 pm
Firestarter says...



Height doesn't really matter...6'5" though! sheesh.

Nice drawing.
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Sun Sep 04, 2005 11:39 am
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*sigh* I love tall guys...

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Sun Sep 04, 2005 11:52 am
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Good pic but everyone right, you need shading an draw it in pen now
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Sun Sep 04, 2005 5:02 pm
Areida says...



Aww...

And the drawing's pretty good, too. :wink:
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Thu Sep 08, 2005 1:22 am
Elizabeth says...



better than many kisses i've drawn.
Not that I really attempted any.
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Thu Sep 08, 2005 6:51 am
Jennafina says...



Thats so cute! I love how the people's posture seams really real.
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Thu Sep 08, 2005 7:10 am
Snoink says...



Nice!

Would it be okay for me to play with it on Photoshop? *puppy eyes*
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Fri Sep 09, 2005 3:03 am
electricbluemonkey says...



Thats pretty good, it looks kind of plain though.
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Sun Oct 09, 2005 2:52 am
zelithon says...



my opinion, the faces should be more defined

by the way my opinion is the most important 1
more shadeing would be good too
  








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