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Fri Oct 24, 2008 10:26 pm
vox nihili says...



Wow! Good for you, thinking to take this picture. I don't know much about photography, but it seems like a really good picture, with everything in focus, and a good perspective. The subject conveys the cheerful but cold days of autumn. I really like the reflection in the water, it's so pretty. You might be able to come up with a better title..something a little less plain.
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Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:54 pm
justin5676 says...



The point of the title was to make it plain. Thanks for the input though; I appreciate it =]
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Sun Oct 26, 2008 12:53 am
Maki-Chan says...



nice job. I love the angle of the camera, where it sees the red tree (Which just pops out) and its reflection. I really love this. I hope you continue with photograpy. ^_^
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Sun Oct 26, 2008 2:05 pm
Sohini says...



I want to there...Now!

The shot is brilliant, completely balanced with the sky and the reflection.

Maybe you should take a zoomed shot of the red tree, all by itself.

A cheerful autumn image.


It doesn't look like winter will approach, the colours and the azure sky make it a happy almost spring time colourful picture.
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Sun Oct 26, 2008 2:44 pm
Shine says...



I wish the water was more clear,but nevermind,lovely shot.

I loved the natural reflecting medium of the whole picture.


Good job!

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Sun Oct 26, 2008 2:49 pm
justin5676 says...



Shine wrote:I wish the water was more clear,but nevermind,lovely shot.

I loved the natural reflecting medium of the whole picture.


Good job!

~Shine~


Yeah, the water is sort of dirty at this spot. Not dirty as in chemical-make-animals-sick, but dirty as in a lot of dirt =P.

And, I wish the Lilly Pads came in more clear too. Oh well, the focus isn't really on them anyways.
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Sun Oct 26, 2008 3:09 pm
Shine says...



Yeah the focus is on.....ummm...well the whole scenario. :D
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Sun Oct 26, 2008 10:46 pm
whispering says...



Ah, yes!
I'm very interesting in photography, just beginning to jump into it. Anyways -

This is a brilliant picture. Captured wonderfully. The title, with all its simplicity, is a perfect one for this picture, and I urge you to not change it. The picture itself - the colors are 100% fall and very beautiful, warm, and rich. It captures nature at one of its many wonderful moments. The sky sitting on top of all the trees - very nice! The reflection in the water is taken at a good angle and the lily pads add a fun little quirk to this scene.

Very good picture. I hope to see more good photography from you!
  





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Mon Oct 27, 2008 12:00 am
googly says...



Oh, I love it! I love the colors of fall - so warm and beautiful (as Whispering said). I like the reflection in the water and the sky complements the whole picture nicely. Not that I know a lot about photography but I really don't think you need to change it at all. =)

Great job!

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Mon Nov 17, 2008 10:06 pm
Sare Agama says...



Ooer! I've never seen a red tree before! (literally!)
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