z

Young Writers Society


Long Haired Girl



User avatar
76 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 890
Reviews: 76
Sat Sep 27, 2008 10:50 am
xGraceex says...



I drew this for school, but im not sure if the teacher liked it! i just did it in pencil but i added some colour on Paint program on the computer so she didnt look so boring. Hope you like!
Attachments
long haired girl.jpg
long haired girl.jpg (107.32 KiB) Viewed 516 times
SOME WISE WORDS xxx
You can't have everything. Where would you put it?
If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried.
I couldn't repair your brakes, so I made your horn louder
All true wisdom is found on T-shirts
  





User avatar
247 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 3414
Reviews: 247
Sat Sep 27, 2008 2:04 pm
Searria H. says...



I hope your teacher liked it!!! I love her hair-do! :D
I like the expression of her face. It actually looks like she's looking at someone or something and not just staring into space. The only critique I have is that her right eye is a little rounder than her left, but...
I would suggest putting a little colour in her hair. For some reason, I'm picturing her with golden locks. You can do whatever you want, though.

I'm glad you put some color in the backround, because she really stands out.

Keep drawing!
-Sea-
'Let's eat Grandma!' or, 'Let's eat, Grandma!' Punctuation saves lives.

Reviews? You know you want one. :)

*Ribbit*
  





User avatar
38 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1188
Reviews: 38
Sun Sep 28, 2008 9:24 pm
JordanEmert says...



I liked this drawing. If I was your teacher I would've given you an A
good luck with future drawings!
  





User avatar
76 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 890
Reviews: 76
Sat Oct 04, 2008 10:11 am
xGraceex says...



Thankyou! :D wow i love nice reviews!
SOME WISE WORDS xxx
You can't have everything. Where would you put it?
If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried.
I couldn't repair your brakes, so I made your horn louder
All true wisdom is found on T-shirts
  





User avatar
297 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 9917
Reviews: 297
Sat Oct 04, 2008 12:48 pm
Kaylyn says...



I think you should work on the eyes a little. I think that they are a little to round. But I love the way you drew the hair like that. I can't do it very well. You're very talented and seemed to get everything else right. You did a great job overall.
As your pretty, so be wise,
Wolves may lurk in every guise.
  





User avatar
86 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 3223
Reviews: 86
Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:10 pm
Tabithalillian says...



yes, I agree the eyes need some work. They look a little too round and large. But the hair is amazing. I love hhow you did the large curls and every thing. It looked really nice!
Living in a tower
  





User avatar
8 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 890
Reviews: 8
Sun Oct 05, 2008 7:42 pm
sircoisoc says...



Ok! so....

Great hair!!! -loved the texture, and the swirls it has. The lips, and nose are pretty good... the only thing that I don't like, are the eyes. They are too round and the pupil has no shadow, they are too basic for my taste. Here I add a web page that maybe will help you be better in the shadowing of the pupil and iris, I know it helped me! And..... the eyebrows are bakcwards and wierd, the thin part goes at the end of the face and the wider part goes near the nose bridge.

Don't worry if your teacher didn't liked it! I loooooove pencil drawings, they are my favorites. And remember beauty is in the eye of the beholder!

I hope this help you improve your work!

http://www.drawspace.com/lessons/lesson.php?id=d03
--I would rather have a mind opened by wonder than one closed by belief--
  





User avatar
25 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 890
Reviews: 25
Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:51 pm
lshryock2 says...



this is awsome!
her hair looks soooo realalistic!
i love her lips and eyes also
great job :!:

your


amazing


at


drawing


:D
"isn't it supposed to be like this? the glory of first love, and all that. it's incredible, isn't it, the difference between reading about something, seeing it in the pictures, and experiencing it?"---twilight
  





User avatar
233 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 9739
Reviews: 233
Fri Nov 21, 2008 4:27 am
Chirantha says...



Gracee, your drawing is also as it is, beautiful.

I also, liked the way you had drawn her eyes staring at something other than staring into space. And her hair also looks magnificent. The way you had let it get curved and curled.

But the thing is, you should have drawn her neck and a little part of her shoulders. Because, I kept on thinking that was a lion's head when I look at the bottom of the picture. It looks as if the girl's head suspended in mid-air. There's another thing, the background made the picture a little unnatural. If you had it as you had it before you remodalized it by 'Paint' it would have been better.

So, I have to say the drawing was beautiful.

Good luck. :D
Warden: "If you want to lead, all you have to do is ask."
Alistair: "What? Lead? Me? No, no, no. No leading. Bad things happen when I lead. We get lost, people die, and the next thing you know I'm stranded somewhere without any pants."
- Dragon Age

Need a review?
  





Random avatar


Gender: Female
Points: 890
Reviews: 24
Wed Nov 26, 2008 1:07 am
Bleeding Rose says...



Okay I like this drawing but the purple paint off of the paint program...eh, you could of done without. I loved her eyes though! They look like flowers, but you could move the eyes over just a little bit. Also, her hair is awesome. I love the way you made it flip out! Great job!
Rite 2 meh lyk dis...and I shoot you.~Unknown
I'm the future of America. Be afraid. Be very afraid~Unknown
If you're blonde and you know it clap your hands *Snap* *snap*
If you're reading this...you're finished reading.
  








If you have to ask, "Is this cliche?", it probably is.
— - no name -