Since I took art for a while, I can look at these and see the effort that probably went into them. I'm not going to tell you what you did wrong, I think you know and honestly even in the proportions of the first bag, it's not that bad. Even though we look at it and say 'it looks kinda tall', the fact is the way you did it makes it look real. You did a good job on shading and coloring (o_O I am sooo envious) and just about everything else. If you think it's not that good it's because you're spending too much time noticing someone else who's better at it than you.
I personally think they're great and very realistic. ^_^ My only real suggestion is you finish the bag handle. I know it won't all fit (>_> *has tired drawing purses and had the same problem*) but just continue it until you hit the end of the page. That way it looks more finished.
What did you do the color in?
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