Young Writers Society

this is what happens when the gang gives Boa the Werewolf a makeover in leather...

Im sorry but you really need to work on the whole body figure, find some books and learn, try doing a skeleton first and get rid of the sketchy lines by using your elbow instead of your hand. (I do it to )

Sorry if I sound harsh but it can help.

yeah I understand your criticism except this is just a little doodle...if it was anything special if would have been worked on more, but thanks

Hey there!! I think these are cool little drawings!

your anime style isn't as clean cut as you normally see, which is why i like it. it's individual; probably reflects a laid-back personality. again, the facial expresssions make my socks rock i'm gonna go look at the rest

I dont get it.. Xp

i like these, you did a great job showing there expressions. the face is very important. i like how it is not perfectly lined. it shows you did a quick draw. and that is cool and very hard to do.
you are a very good artist.

kim

Even though I don't get the whole "Boa" thingie, I thought this looked nice. Small and cute-y.

I don't get it. Is the dude hittin' on the girl?
Think it needs a background and some colour! XD

This is excellent!
I mean, you could fix it up a bit, but for a quick draw, this is stunning. I love the facial expressions especially.
One thing that bugged me was that the people are on a slant, kind of. But the clothes were really cool and overall this was really neato.
Cheers,
Ayra

Wow, this is old.

Um, I don't really get it either...like the others.

I think the style is pretty good, but all too common these days. I like definite lines, though, and this is a little ... transparent?