Dear Do,
You suck, you know that? There's a massive gap in the middle of my story! How do I go from sitting in the cafeteria at a cemetary with Lynn, to being choked to death by my stepfather in some deserted military base where my mom happens to also be kept and from which Michael apparantly controled all the shit his little henchmen have been putting me through?
Hello? EXPLAIN?
Ugh. You're mean.
Aside from that little... issue. You're allright, I suppose... You're putting me through hell, but at least I've got my younger brother and sister who care about me; not to mention Jason, Drew, Ally, Thomas and Christy. And you somehow wrote in an unexpected scene in which my mom's life is saved, against all odds. So, all in all, you're torturing me, but giving me a lot as well. This brings your status up; so now you HALF-suck.
Go write and fill in the blanks, dude,
Xxx Jess Parker
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