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avianwings47 says...



Legos

i’m made of legos;
you can tear me down
piece by piece
until i’ve built myself back up again.



Spoiler! :
Uhhhh no, I did not just spend ten minutes researching if I could legally use the word "legos" in this poem. What are you talking about?
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“Such nonsense!" declared Dr Greysteel. "Whoever heard of cats doing anything useful!" "Except for staring at one in a supercilious manner," said Strange. "That has a sort of moral usefulness, I suppose, in making one feel uncomfortable and encouraging sober reflection upon one's imperfections.”
— Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell