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Sun Apr 24, 2011 7:13 am
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Button says...



but when your wings have
frayed and grayed and you fall, I
am still not a God.
  





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Sun Apr 24, 2011 3:52 pm
jellybean says...



And when you tumbled
from the sky, you took a breath;
angels always fall.
"Whatever will happen, will happen. You either face it as a coward or you face it as a hero." - O.R. Melling

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Sun Apr 24, 2011 6:20 pm
earendil says...



Setting with the sun,
you count down to the point when
wings and earth collide.
Last edited by earendil on Tue Apr 26, 2011 3:38 am, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Sun Apr 24, 2011 7:29 pm
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Lumi says...



Yesterday, it fell:
a great iron beast of the sky;
Heaven's wrath in fire.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


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Sun Apr 24, 2011 7:48 pm
jellybean says...



Fire bit at feathers;
someone has fallen from grace,
the onlookers say.
Last edited by jellybean on Mon Apr 25, 2011 2:43 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon Apr 25, 2011 2:06 am
Calligraphy says...



Voices echo down.
Screaming and yelling. Then there
is complete silence.

(I am really bad at this!)
  





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Mon Apr 25, 2011 3:17 am
Lumi says...



We all like to dance
like coals are beneath our feet;
this is our idol.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Mon Apr 25, 2011 7:09 am
Button says...



and we will keep our
singed flesh and sacrifices;
dance through dusk and dawn.
  





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Mon Apr 25, 2011 12:49 pm
jellybean says...



It's okay to love
this, a never ending dance.
You don't have to stop.
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Mon Apr 25, 2011 1:14 pm
Calligraphy says...



Each to their own song
Swaying to their own rhythm
Yet they are still one
  





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Mon Apr 25, 2011 11:43 pm
jellybean says...



And what happens when
the song suddenly changes?
Will you change as well?
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Tue Apr 26, 2011 11:11 am
Lumi says...



The fire in my heart
burns like a distant nova;
I need antacids.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


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Tue Apr 26, 2011 11:30 am
PenguinAttack says...



In my dreams, you stand,
teeth loose in your jaw, cold spears
cutting through my lip.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Tue Apr 26, 2011 9:28 pm
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How many times did
you wake up, wondering what
would happen to me?
"Whatever will happen, will happen. You either face it as a coward or you face it as a hero." - O.R. Melling

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Sun May 01, 2011 3:28 pm
Lumi says...



It's cool, bro; it's cool:
she got the best of us both.
Haters gonna hate.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


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