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Thu Nov 10, 2011 3:37 am
FadingBrighter says...



They call him Satan. The devil. And he's not happy.
Sent to the depths of hell for his selfishness and pride, Lucifer is finally ready to return. And he's taking his revenge on the ones who hurt him most:
Humanity.
On earth, the apocalypse has begun. The four horseman have begun to run rampant:War, pestilence, famine, and Death plague the earth with untold destruction.
But it is not angels, but humans who are charged with the duty of protecting the world. Humans with special gifts called talents. They are able to see what no other can see, and are naturally stronger than the average man. They must face the creatures of the night, and defeat untold horror.
Demons:dark and distorted fallen angles who hide behind a glamour to resemble humans. To talents, they glow a dark violet, and their eyes reflect like mirrors. Their single goal is to spread malice, chaos and destruction.
Talents:Stronger, faster, and quicker to heal than normal humans. They each possess a blade that is 'part' of them(not attached, but forms from a drop of blood) these blades are the only things able to kill demons. They are able to see souls, and whenever a soul is corrupted they see horrifyingly grotesque creatures.
Angles: they are not the kind, forgiving creatures we see today. They are warriors of God, and do not like humans in the least. They will kill anyone who gets in the way of their duty, and use any means necessary to get the job done.
The story: The school year has just begun at the University, an extremely well known school in the forests of Montana. But the new school year brings with it a number of atrocities that a group of talents must decipher to stop the world from ending.
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Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:34 pm
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Name:Felicia Pepper
Gender:female
Age:22
Race:human
Appearance:
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Felicia, also none as Fey, has long white hair and light brown eyes. She is fair, and pretty, with a curvy figure and average height.
Personality:Fey is kind and quite, shy around people she does not know.
History:Fey's parents were murdered before her very eyes when she was ten. Ever since, she has been very silent, and has kept to herself. She lives on a large estate with her aunt.
Romance?:Yes
Other:Fey plays a violin sililar to this:
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Her playing is enchantingly beautiful, and as she later learns, can combat that of the demon Micah-who plays a violin as well that makes anyone who ears it's tune do his biding.
Fey's weapon is the Demon blade Manon. With it, she is able to swiftly burn any with an unworthy soul or heart.
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Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:47 pm
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Name:Micah
Gender:Male
Age:looks around 26
Race:Demon
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Soft brown hair, vivid violet eyes. Impossibly handsome.He looks sweet and cuddly, right? wrong. Despite his handsome, charming appearance Micah is uncaring and cruel. He plays his lovely tune to steal your soul.
Personality:Micah care little for anyone but himself.
Romance?:Yes
Other:
He to plays violin, but his tune is a dark melody that forces the listener to follow his will and steals away your soul.
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Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:59 pm
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Name:Alexander 'Alec' Tythe
Gender:male
Age:24
Race:Talent

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Alec is handsome, with silvery hair and stunning blue eyes. He tends to wear dark clothing, and can always be found with a headset around his neck. When in battle, he seems to become a completly different person, with red eyes and a cold smile.

Personality:Quite, but layed back, Alec has always been a reble.

History:When he was a child, Alecs mother had been beaten infront of him. Then she died from mysterious circumstances. Alec spent most of his life in foster homes, doing everything in his poer to survive till the next day.

Romance?:No.

Other:Alec is not a real Talent. His powers come from the angel who melded bodies with him when he was a child on the streets. The angel saved him from death, but controls his body during battle.His scythe is named Vendetta(revenge).
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Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:43 am
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Name:Azazeal
Gender:male
Age:26
Race:Demon
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Azazeal looks dark and enchanting. He is impossibly beautiful, even more so in his true form(as seen by the talents). He has long black hair and eyes that alternate from blue to green to gold depending on his mood.

Personality:A demon general and Lucifer's right hand man, Azazeal has always had an eye for the beautiful. It was beauty that made him fall from heaven in the first place. Felicia, who stuns him with her resemblance to his first love immediantly captures his heart and his obsession. He wishes to turn her, and will do anything to do do, even take away the things she care about most.

History: Azazeal was one of the first angels to turn to Satan during the war in heaven because he wished to be able to love a human girl who he had fallen for. When he fell, his heart grew cold, but seeing Felicia immediantly brings back the memory. Though he wasn't exactly kind to her either.
Romance?:Yes
Other: Azazeal has one great power, and it resides over women. Any woman who sees him is bound to fall for him. A demons power comes from his greatest sin, and Azazeal had first committed the crime of lust.His swords name is lust and resembles
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Sun Nov 13, 2011 3:58 am
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I'm having 4 characters.
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Sun Nov 13, 2011 6:17 am
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Name: Kaityln Fleurs (also known as Katie)

Gender: female

Age: 21

Race: Talent

Appearance: Turquoise eyes that seem to glow with the power she houses inside her body. Long, dark green hair that's the signature color of the Fleurs family falls widely around her face. She often wears sensible clothing, but she always has her white jacket.

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Personality: More motherly than she should be and is often pointing out what could go wrong. She doesn't tolerate being unable to protect those she loves, and is loyal to the people who've earned her respect.When it comes to falling in love or flirting, she is more reluctant because of her worry for her younger sister. Katie works well in groups and can often be found reading or day-dreaming in gardens while listening to an instrumental piece of music.

History: When Kaitlyn was fourteen, she and her younger sister lost their parents to a fire in their family's townhouse. Now, they live in a cabin on the edges of Felicia's Aunt's estate in order to be close to people because Katie dislikes being in a city where the sound of birds is drowned out by the city noise. In return for letting them stay so close, Felicia's Aunt lets Cari tend the gardens.

Romance?: Absolutely

Other: Her katana is named Dove and makes any who is cut by her less likely to attack an innocent.

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Her younger sister is Cari Fleurs, and she's protective of her when it comes to boys; though she'll let Cari fight in battle. Both she and her sister have a green thumb and love to be outside, even with the dangers of demons and angels.
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Sun Nov 13, 2011 6:45 am
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Name: Cari Fleurs

Gender: female

Age: 19

Race: Human

Appearance: Dark green eyes that show what she's thinking before she even gets the chance to say anything. Long, light green hair (green hair is the signature color of the Fleurs family) falls down her back and hasn't been cut since he was twelve in honor of her parents. She always has a scarf around her neck, along with short-sleeve blouses with dark-colored corgo-pants and black fingerless gloves. The tattoos on her upper arms are the way she supports her older sister Katie, who is a Talent, and they ward off most of the weaker demons and angels.

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Personality:She is often relaxed and balances out her sister's constant worrying with her carefree outlook on life. Cari procrastinates often, worries little, and protects her sister from herself. Around new people, she gets right to the point. She is often found with Fey who could be her opposite, and she tries not to bother her when she wants to be alone. (She leaves Fey alone when she wants to be alone about 45% of the time).

History: When she was twelve, her parents died in a fire at their townhouse. Now she lives with her sister in a cabin on the edge of the Pepper family estate. Cari was taught how to fight by Katie after the fire in order to protect herself. Cari loves to work in the garden, and does so for Felicia's Aunt. Most of the time she is humming a tune that was taught to her by her mother.

Romance?: Absolutely not, flirting is aloud but she can not have an actual relationship with anyone.

Other: Her throwing stars belonged to her parents and looked similar to these but with glowing green edges;

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Though Katie doesn't allow her to have a boyfriend, she fights against demons with her sometimes. Most of the time she is organizing school dances to keep busy for Katie.
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Mon Nov 14, 2011 2:50 am
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Name: Ashlynn (Ash) Grise

Gender: Female

Age: 20

Race: Talent

Appearance: Ashlynn has long black hair that she likes to keep up in high ponytails and bangs that partially cover her black eyes. She is slim and has fairly pale skin.

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Personality: She is usually pretty quiet, but will speak up if she has a strong opinion or is nervous. She usually lets other people do the talking and is more of a listener. Ashlynn doesn't usually take the lead, preffering to work "backstage" than in the spotlight. She gets a bit uncomfortable in crowds and enjoys the quiet, but can only stand it for so long.

History: Moved a lot with her parents before moving out and settling down to start college. Her parents were extremely religious, and inspite-or maybe because-of that, she now tries to avoid religion, though she does continue to pray on occasion.

Romance?: Yes.

Other: Likes animals, reading, fantasy, and archery. Doesn't have many dislikes, but will make it apparent if she sees one. She sometimes wrings her hands or plays with a hairtie when she's nervous or upset.

Her weapon is a bow and arrows, and the bow has a razor sharp edge along the curve, making it useful in short and long range.

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Mon Nov 14, 2011 4:48 am
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Name: Darrius Cutter (often just called Cutter by his friends)

Gender: Male

Age: Looks 24, real age unknown

Race: Angel

Appearance: He looks like he should be fallen with his black hair that falls over his left eye (right if your looking at him) with white eyes. Darrius wears black shirts under a white collared vest. The crystal around his neck often contains his power, and hides his wings when needed. Black gauntlets cover his hands, leaving his pinkie and ring finger exposed. Wears brown pants and has two brown belts around his waist.

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Romance?: Yes (but he'll be difficult to work with in that relationship).

Personality: Serious most of the time, and can't stand others being incompetent. Has a heavy use of sarcasm and has trouble breaking old habits. Often finds himself falling in to old patterns with the demon, Blake, and though he is a warrior of heaven, he doesn't kill indiscriminately, even among demons and humans. He is fascinated by Talents and tends to forget that humans exist as well.

History: He lost his eye sight when he was young, and met Blake shortly after. Thanks to his friendship with Blake, he was able to remain a warrior angel, and avoided execution. Darrius used to be brothers-in-arms with Blake (some say that they were brothers by choice if not by blood), until Blake fell and became a demon. Darrius was the one to cut off Blake's wings, and to give him the flaming skull tattoo on his neck. As a result, Darrius has the same tattoo on the palm of his hand as a reminder of what he'd been forced to do. He is tormented by what he'd done to Blake daily. Since then, he avoids many of the other angels and he'd be considered fallen if not for his unwavering loyalty. He lives in the woods when he isn't in the heavenly sphere.

Other: His blade (behind him in the appearance spoiler) glows a dark purple when in use and when demons are nearby and is called the Holy Widow because of it's past. The chain around it is part of the curved hilt and can capture/slow demons depending on their rank and level of power. The curved handle on his sword can also be used as a separate weapon should he need a smaller one.
Secretly, Darrius meets with Blake to hang out, they'll always see each other as brothers first, angel and demon second, and enemies last. If Darrius sees other demons though, he engages them in battle instantly.
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Mon Nov 14, 2011 5:55 am
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Name: Blake "Crossfire"

Gender: Male

Age: Looks 22, real age unknown

Race: Demon

Appearance: He looks like the perfect angel with his blond hair and charming smile. His eyes are a light grey that hide what he is really thinking. He has a very expressive face, though whether or not if those expressions are true remains to be seen. The flaming skull tattoo on his neck is to remind him of the deadly sin he rules over: Wrath. The leather rope that loops around his neck is a joke of his that only Darrius truly understands. The symbol on his collar and cuff links is the North Star that he added to a school uniform from a school in Europe. Blake is nearly always wearing it, and the only time that he isn't is when he doesn't have to do anything. He always has a red rose with him and brown gloves on. (Oh, and he is drop dead gorgeous!)

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Romance?: Sure, BUT he will be unable to figure out his feelings at first and will continue to flirt outrageously until he does. Once he figures it out his feelings... well, everyone should be wary.

Personality: Blake is VERY cocky and sure of himself in most situations. Most of the time, he doesn't care about others, but when he does care about someone he can be protective and dangerous (though that protectiveness has a tendency to splash back on him in the worst of ways). He seems to have little or no instinct for self-preservation and often angers Satan and the other Generals, which he has made his personal goal because then he gains power. If Azazeal is Satan's right hand man, then Blake is his annoying left. Blake contains his emotions until he lets them out in a wave of destructive anger. While he was an angel, he used to be cold-hearted in heaven, though no one knows why he seems to have a kinder heart now that he is a demon. The walls around his heart are thick and nothing has been able to get past them. Until he sees Kaitlyn who he can't resist toying with because of how uptight she can be.

History: Blake fell from heaven after an outburst of anger that killed nearly all of his squad members and left the rest injured. He'd helped Darrius regain his place as a warrior among the angels and considers him the stressed-out older brother he never had. When he fell, it was Darrius who'd cut off his wings. He was given his tattoo shortly before he fell by Darrius, and he has heard rumors about a similar marking on Darrius's own hand. Now that he is with Satan, he is the General of Wrath and he tends to frequent bars and clubs to watch the fights that break out. His nickname/lastname, "Crossfire" was given to him by the demons he controls because of his habit of dragging others into fights. He lives in the darker parts of town, or the parts that have an aura of potential anger-inspired fights to occur, when he is on earth.

Other: His weapon are two angel wing blades that he can hold in his hand or control them from a distance. They are wickedly shard despite their appearance, and are named the Crow Divers. They look similar to this:
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Blake is fascinated by flowers (which is probably another reason as to why he is fascinated with Katie) and has a hidden garden that he doesn't let anyone know about. Darrius is the only one who knows about his peculiar fascination, though everyone should know because of how he always carries a red rose.
Secretly,Blake will meet with Darrius to hang out, they'll always see each other as brothers first, angel and demon second, and enemies last. They never let anyone know about the meetings, and even if their superiors know about the meetings, they either don't care or are hoping that one or the other will give up useful information.
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Mon Nov 14, 2011 6:02 am
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Name:Laurial
Gender:Male
Age:looks 27
Species:Angel

Appearence:
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Laurial has light blonde hair and pale blue eyes. He normally wears a loose white button up shirt and black pants. On his back, he has a mark like this, that symbolizes his rank:


Personality:Laurial is akward, because he is unused to the modern world. But he's kind and funny, and completely oblivious.

History:Laurial is one of the generals of heavens armies, the third most powerful after Gabriel and Michael. He was sent to earth to stop Lucifer's rising and protect mankind.

Romane:Yes

Other:His sword's name is leviathan and resembles:
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Mon Nov 14, 2011 9:30 pm
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Name:Loki
Gender:male
Age:28
Race:Demon(Greed)

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Has long light blue hair that is normally pulled back and eyes that resemble liquid gold. He can normally be found wearing very formal, very Victorian clothing and a top hat.

Personality: Loki, as his name suggests, is a terrible trickster. he loves to play tricks and is a tremendous flirt. He is a player in the very essence of the word, and is very good at getting women to adore him. He longs for women and power.

Romance?:No
Other:His whips name is Gifre, meaning greed. They are leather whips that a have blue tips that burn blue.
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Mon Nov 14, 2011 9:56 pm
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Name:Jaquline Fleurs
Gender:Female
Age:21
Race:Talent

Appearance:
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Short dark green hair and vivid green eyes that resemble oak leaves in spring. She is tall and thin, with a very straight, uncurvy figure. She is willowy, but beautiful in a straight angle sort of way.
Personality:Kind, and soft. She is not nurturing like her sister, but is caring. She is in love with life.
Romance?:no
Other:Her weapon is throwing stars named Gremline they look like:
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Mon Nov 14, 2011 11:04 pm
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Name:Eleanor Schwitz
Gender:Female
Age:16
Species:Talent

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Long dark brown hair and light eyes, Eleanor is absolutely stunning. She is of medium height, and not the smallest in size, but beautiful none the less.
Personality:Ella prides herself in her excellent singing voice and ability to draw. Being a doll, she does not speak openly at first, but later she becomes very opinionated.

History:Eleanor's sister died under her watch, possessed by a demon who stole her sisters heart and body. Years later, at peace with the past, she re encounters the demon who ruined her life.

Other:
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