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Thu Apr 09, 2009 12:44 am
October Girl says...



"Right." Tyrel growled.

"It would have been free too. So what's he getting uner your skin for?" the police offecr asked.

"My wife and daughter." Tyrel ground out.

"Ouch." He replied.

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Katy walked up to Eric and slammed her fist right into his jaw. "You don't EVER EVER threaten my husband like that you get it?!"

"Katy I-"

"NO! I love him, Eric. Back off I want him not you, I'm sorry. I want him." Katy shifted Amanda onto her other hip and went to go sit on the grass.
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Thu Apr 09, 2009 1:00 am
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Tyrel leaned his head back lookign at Katy as she sat on the grass.

"You have an adorable little kid." The guy smiled.

"Thanks." He frowned talking a deep breath.

"You should go talk to her. "

"WHy?" He demanded

"Cause she needs you to back her up, she just assulted an officer, in reality she should get arrested, but I doubt he'll press charges. Don't let him be the one to comfort her."

"THanks." He got up and walked over to where Katy was sitting and just sat down next to her.
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Thu Apr 09, 2009 1:05 am
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Katy stared down at Amanda who was looking up widely at both parents.

"Look if you came over here to bitch go away." she said, not looking at him.

He laughed a little bit. "I don't bitch."

"Do too." she didn't let a smile wash over her face.

"Well even IF, and thats a big IF, I did bitch I didn't come here to." he said.

She stared at him. "Then what?"
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Thu Apr 09, 2009 1:10 am
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He shrugged. "Figured you might want some company." He replied.

"RIght." She laughed.

"You know, you can do more damage to a guys face wtih your knuckles." He smiled at her.
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Thu Apr 09, 2009 1:17 am
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Katy didn't even feel the throbbing in her knuckles. She looked over at him. "I really do love you." she said. "I don't know how to show it to you. But I do."

Amanda made a funny sound.
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Thu Apr 09, 2009 1:24 am
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Tyrel looked down at Amanda and touched her little cheek. "I think I understand." He said softly. to her.


*tears*
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Thu Apr 09, 2009 1:29 am
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Katy looked at him.

"I don't really expect you to forgive me." she admitted. She looked down unable to stop looking at their daughter realizing how much she looked like both of them, she was beautiful.


**ugh I have to go, long day. I'll get on later**
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Thu Apr 09, 2009 1:35 am
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"I love you, I can't not forgive you." He sighed.


***I'm going to mississippi this weekend. I'm not sure how much I'll get on. I'm leaving tomorrow.***
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Thu Apr 09, 2009 3:23 am
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**It's totally fine**

Katy looked at him. "I didn't really kiss him you know, it was the other way around." she confessed.

She saw the look on his face, it was priceless.

"Then why did you-" he started.

"It doesn't matter now." she kissed him.
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Thu Apr 09, 2009 10:26 am
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He let himself sink into the kiss before pulling back. He glanced towards where Eric was. "I didn't tell you cause I don't want you to go beat the hell out of him."

"I would've." He replied. He was still kinda thinking about it. But he didn't feel betrayed anymore.

"I know." SHe smiled. He kissed her again and pulled her close to him.

"YOu don't know how happy I am to know you didn't kiss him." He sighed against her hair.
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Fri Apr 10, 2009 12:06 am
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Katy held onto him tightly. "I do love you." she promised. "I couldn't. You'd just told me you loved me. Why would I go and ruin that?" she asked.

"I dunno." he replied.

"I just wish that those damn bastards were found already." she growled, forgetting her daughter was close.
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Fri Apr 10, 2009 1:20 am
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Tyrel smiled softly and touched Amanda's head. "Long as she is with us."

*Tears*
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Katy nodded and admired her daughter's view. "She's so small and innocent." Katy smiled. :At first I thought she had the worst pick of the pack for parents."

"Never you." he said.

"Especially me, I kept trying to take her away from you. I'm sorry about that." she kissed him. "In fact, I love yooooou sooooooo much I think we should get married again." she smiled.
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Fri Apr 10, 2009 1:40 am
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Tyrel smiled. "Want to wait until we're through this hell whole?" He asked.

"watch what you say." She smiled at him.

"Sorry." He smiled back.
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Fri Apr 10, 2009 2:18 am
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"No, I think it would just be sooo much more fun if we got married with a couple of physcos on our back. I don't know about you but it seems like a better idea." she smiled while sarcasim dripped from her voice.

"Ha ha, funny." he rolled his eyes.

"I thought so." she smiled still. "Maybe we can go back to the paradise we called our Honeymoon."
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