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Thu Jan 29, 2009 1:38 am
TNCowgirl says...



Jake shrugged. "Girls, I say she's pmsing." He shrugged. They started to walk around a corner and Leal stepped in front of them.

"Pms, this!" She hissed slapping him hard then glaring at Tom and storming off the other way having gone the wrong way in the first place.
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Sat Jan 31, 2009 12:39 am
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"erm... " Jake said as he held his hand to his face.

"What the hell" Tom said, "Ya no what I give up, I have Kayleigh I sould stick with her"

"Whatever dude" Jake said.
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Sat Jan 31, 2009 2:52 am
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***I don't know what to put***
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Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:09 am
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Kris grabbed his phone, he had watched what had just happened. He dialled in Leal's number.

"Babe you alright" He said as he heard her breathing heavily down the phone.
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Wed Feb 04, 2009 2:40 am
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"No." Leal said taking a deep breath. "I'm not. I"m tired of all guys. They don't care and UGH!"

*tears*
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Wed Feb 04, 2009 3:00 am
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"So your going to turn into a lesbien" kris laughs,

"Of course not" She replys,

"Let me take you out to dinner, you can tell me everything then"
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Wed Feb 04, 2009 3:01 am
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"NOt a date though?" She asked.

"Not a date." He repleid.

"Fine, but your brother can't come." She said firmly.

"Didn't plan on him being there."
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Wed Feb 04, 2009 3:05 am
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"Ok, See you tonight then" Leal said,

"See you then" Kris repiled smiling. He put the phone down and wished for the day to end.
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Wed Feb 04, 2009 2:46 pm
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Leal went through the rest of the day avoiding Jake and Tom. She was fed up with them both. She really liked JAke too. But it seemed that he liked Sarah better. She took a deep breath, then tehre was Tom. Why the hell was he so double faced. It was annoying.


*Tears, I'm really in a bad writers block right now. :'(*
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:55 pm
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Kris spent the whole day, wishing it would end. When he'd get to see Leal again. He wanted to prove to her that all males as bad as then and he wanted to comfont her.

*me too :@
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:23 pm
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***I've nothing***
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Mon Feb 16, 2009 12:58 am
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It was the end of the day and Kris went to the local burger bar were he would meet Leal. She was already sat, looking misable at the table. Kris sat next to her putting his arm over her shoulder and tried to comfort her. He excepted her to strug it off but she just continued and began to cry. He whispered in her ear. "its ok, I wont let them hurt you" he began to cry now, her sadness over powering him. She looked up at him and he kissed her check and handed her a tissue. This isn't like leal he thought to himslef. He waited for her to slap him and tell her to get away from her but she didn't.
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Mon Feb 16, 2009 1:18 am
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***What's with Leal other then being competely miserable***

Leal couldn't stop the tears. SHe was tired of all this. She just wanted to be away, wanted to be free of all these guys that were just trying to use her.

"It's ok." Kris whispered again. She pulled away wiping her eyes and taking a deep breath.

"Sorry." She whispered.
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Mon Feb 16, 2009 1:35 am
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*the thing Kris is finding wierd about her is that she'd usually pull away and tell him to get off her*

"Its alright" he said, wiping a tear from under his eye, "erm.... let me get you a drink"

He walked up to the counter and got 2 cans of coke, sat back down and placed on infornt of her.

"Im sorry, i souldn't of got that close" he said staring down at the table.
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Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:01 am
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"NO, thanks. I'm sorry if I'm leading you on, I'm not trying to. I just need someone to talk to. Someone that's real, and so far your the only real one at our school." She whimpered as she opend ehr can and took a drink.


*tears, it's so short*
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