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Father, Forgive Us {DT}



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Thu Jan 24, 2013 5:42 pm
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Storms can come unexpectantly at the demon's will, but generally regular weather.
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Thu Jan 24, 2013 6:02 pm
elysian says...



okay. i will post the pretty much intro to my character later tonight. it will be right after Aria's post:) this is an awesome book by the way. amazing idea:)
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Thu Jan 24, 2013 6:17 pm
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Caesar says...



Aria, dat post. Dat post.
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Thu Jan 24, 2013 6:52 pm
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*only grins and stays silent*
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Thu Jan 24, 2013 9:01 pm
KingLucifer says...



Genesis spell shouldn't have changed the world all that much, granted there will be demons coming out of where the portals are open. Cause demons can generally come and go between Hell and Earth as they please, Genesis magic alone can't summon Lucifer tho, she has to make special summoning preperations in order to summon him to Earth. And if she does, then I call checkmate on the good guys, and Mark.
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Thu Jan 24, 2013 9:34 pm
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:twisted:
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Thu Jan 24, 2013 11:31 pm
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sorry, writing the rest now guys
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Fri Jan 25, 2013 12:26 am
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okay. done. if there is anything wrong with what I posted PLEASE tell me:)
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Fri Jan 25, 2013 3:51 pm
KingLucifer says...



@Aria Nemier was sleeping at the foot of Violeta's bed, she wouldn't have ignored the situation, and would have said something, or got ready to play her flute.
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Fri Jan 25, 2013 3:54 pm
Caesar says...



She could have left in the meanwhile. Be flexible :P an encounter with Angel in that state of mind would have spelled Nemier's violent death.
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Fri Jan 25, 2013 4:02 pm
KingLucifer says...



Louis does she really seem that fragile to you?
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Fri Jan 25, 2013 4:11 pm
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If by fragile you mean weak, then yes. Most things fall before an angry Angel. He wasn't very... stable then, either. I'm pretty sure Aria can elaborate.

Furthermore on a more pressing and immediate side, it would involve a serious re-writing and re-considering of Aria's post. On the other hand, in your next post as Nemier, if you add, retrospectively, that Nemier left, no harm done.

For the record, to avoid this from happening again, I recommend we speak with the others that might be involved an such.

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Fri Jan 25, 2013 4:26 pm
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LH, Nemier doesn't have to leave.
She was in Violeta's room, and Violeta would notice her when she'd wake up. However, Violeta cares for her as her friend, and wouldn't let her risk going out and getting hurt. She would tell her to stay inside, and hide as Angel comes in, because there was no way of knowing if he'll behave better in the morning.

I'm more than ok with you writing a retrospective post about that - you can make them talk about should Violeta go and forgive him after he says he'll leave, and you can write whatever you want to happen now. Angel is relatively nice, and Violeta is safe enough, and if Nemier comes to confront him now, she won't end up dead.

And after all, by the time Nemier arrived, Mark was already there too - would she turn against both just like that?
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Fri Jan 25, 2013 4:32 pm
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Nemier doesn't know of the incident between Mark and Mias, so she wouldn't fight Mark, let alone actually be able to beat him, not until she reaches the full extent of what she can do. As for Mark, Ita said he'll leave her alone for now, and by time he does finally come for her, she'll have a remote chance at actually beating him.
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Fri Jan 25, 2013 4:36 pm
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Sure, all that stands.. But if Nemier stormed in and attacked Angel in any way, you think Mark would just stand and watch?
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