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Sun Apr 06, 2014 4:23 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



Well, only female is left XD
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Sun Apr 06, 2014 4:30 pm
Messenger says...



that might be taken so you can still choose
  





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Sun Apr 06, 2014 7:44 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



It's already done.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Sun Apr 06, 2014 9:44 pm
NicoleBri says...



When shall we start?
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Sun Apr 06, 2014 9:51 pm
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@ladcat13 will be posting the first post when she gets on.
  





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Mon Apr 07, 2014 11:30 am
TakeThatYouFiend says...



I've posted! If anyone wants to meet up they could hear my playing and try and find me.
Hope its ok @Messenger @ladcat13 it's only a first post so it's quite short.
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?
  





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Mon Apr 07, 2014 12:19 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



Posted also.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Mon Apr 07, 2014 12:44 pm
Apricity says...



Posted, Kel's got a fire going so if anyone else wants to meet up with him they've got a good excuse. Or any beasts for that matter.
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'And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music.' ― Friedrich Nietzsche

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Mon Apr 07, 2014 1:31 pm
NicoleBri says...



@SubtleSanity I hope my post with Kel is okay. If you need me to change anything let me know!
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Mon Apr 07, 2014 2:15 pm
Apricity says...



@pandabear7, ^^, most of it is pretty good though I'm not too sure Kel would trust Danielle so quickly let alone talk with her. He's very awkward with strangers, so maybe alter that a bit. And he probably would have slept somewhere close to night, whereas Danielle slept beside him. He probably would come yo trust her more though, as the story progresses.
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Mon Apr 07, 2014 2:36 pm
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I fixed it @subtlesanity xD
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Mon Apr 07, 2014 5:18 pm
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You guys be posting before the manager? O_O that's ok because I already have my post written :P
  





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Mon Apr 07, 2014 5:22 pm
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Sassafras says...



I wake up to this?! Y'all are some quick ones.
A pale imitator of a girl in the sky.
  





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Mon Apr 07, 2014 5:57 pm
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NicoleBri says...



I hope everyone starts writing longer, including myself. XD
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Mon Apr 07, 2014 6:11 pm
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NicoleBri says...



Sorry I just had to post again! XD
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