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Wed Jul 16, 2014 3:29 pm
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Wolfi says...



@JamesHunt great job! :D
John 14:27:
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Wed Jul 16, 2014 3:31 pm
BrumalHunter says...



Thank you, @Wolfie36!
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Wed Jul 16, 2014 3:32 pm
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AdmiralKat says...



XD Raven is now friends with Zon's and writer's characters. They are enemies, so we will see some DRAMA.
Whale. Whale. Whale. What do we have here?
Some scurvy dog looking at my post, eh?
  





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Wed Jul 16, 2014 3:33 pm
Cithara says...



Oh no XD this is gonna be good ;)
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but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
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Wed Jul 16, 2014 3:37 pm
RoyalHighness says...



Is it too late to ask if I can make a new character out of one of my NPCs?
I'm really interested in fleshing out Friday Jackson as a character, since I'm actually using her in another story I'm working on and I need to see how she'll fare in "real life" stories.
  





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Wed Jul 16, 2014 3:56 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



@RoyalHighness, I don't think that is really necessary; after all, Rowling employed an omniscient narrator and only ever wrote out of Harry's perspective, but that does not mean she could not describe and characterise Ron and Hermione, for example, sufficiently. Try doing the same.

Ways through which you can achieve this is by making Friday Nova's "Ron". They both have the same classes, after all, so then they can chat when the teacher is not looking and discuss work, other students, etc., as well as doing everything together and then sharing their thoughts concerning the matter.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
  





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Wed Jul 16, 2014 4:14 pm
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RoyalHighness says...



@JamesHunt Wow, I never thought of it that way! I think I'll do that, as a matter of fact. Thank you!!
  





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Wed Jul 16, 2014 4:16 pm
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dragonthief1 says...



@aurora99. @jameshunt. @wolfare1

Im including these npc's as my student but feel free to make them some of your own

Gryffindor- Thomas Edsun-6th year M
Timothy Charton- 7th year, Quidditch captiain for Gryffindor M
Emily Baker- 6th year F
Muhammad Khazid- 3rd year M
Melody Simmons- 3rd year F

Slytherin- Jesper Hodkins- 3rd year M
Alaina Edginton- 6th year F
Phelipe Loren- 6th year M
Keith Edwards- 6th year M
Bethany Smith- 3rd year F

Ravenclaw- Tony Wardle- 6th year M
Riley Smith(Beth's older sister)- 6th year F
Augustus Reid- 3rd year M
Sacheem Kumad- 7th year Quidditch team captain
Lukas Dunn- 3rd year M

Hufflepuff- Edward Munford- 6th year M
Megan Munford ( Edwards younger sister)- 3rd year F
Penelope Therin- 3rd year F
Skyler Bunnell- 3rd year M
Christopher Bunnell- 3rd year M (Twin to Skyler)
  





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Wed Jul 16, 2014 5:59 pm
BrumalHunter says...



These are the most complicated relationships I have ever seen, and that is definitely saying something! I regret/am relieved I am not a student...

I have updated my list of relationships, so if anyone is wondering how things are, go take a look; however, if you wish to add something, feel free to do so. Others already have, and I thank them for it. Also...

Step right up, folks, and choose yerself an NPC! dragon 'ere 'as an extensive list of NPC's who will be takin' DADA. If yer've always been looking for a possy, but never 'ad the mates for one, or yer simply want a best friend, now's yer chance! Grab 'em while stocks last!
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
  





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Wed Jul 16, 2014 10:50 pm
AfterTheStorm says...



Just as a note, @avalon, Kristof would never cheat, sabotage, or cut corners to win anything. He can be a slight jerk, but he has a certain sense of honor.
"And after the storm..." ~Mumford and Sons

You can't have a rainbow without a little rain.

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Proverbs 31:25

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Made you look.
  





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Wed Jul 16, 2014 10:59 pm
KingLucifer says...



Noted.
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!

Formerly: Avalon
  





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Thu Jul 17, 2014 4:19 pm
BrumalHunter says...



@dragonthief1, did you know that in Greek mythology, Cerberus had a two-headed brother named Orthrus?
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
  





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Fri Jul 18, 2014 2:42 pm
KingLucifer says...



*Pokes people in the back with a knife* someone post!
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Fri Jul 18, 2014 2:45 pm
AdmiralKat says...



mehhhhhhhhhhhhh. I don't wanna though! XD I'll try to do it as soon as possible, just so busy.
Whale. Whale. Whale. What do we have here?
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Fri Jul 18, 2014 3:55 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



@Zontafer, @Wolfie36, @KatyaElefant, @FaerieQueen, @AfterTheStorm and @Wolfare1, if you don't want to write about the feast, you can write about the following morning's breakfast. (Just remember, I am teaching the sixth years Charms first period, so don't just skip to the classes.) They receive their mail that first morning, right?

Oh, and @Fade, I like your effective use of colloquialisms in Hagrid's speech, but don't omit letters in words which are already contractions or colloquialisms (don't = contraction, 'o'n't = ??; wanna = colloquialism, 'anna = ???) - it reads quite difficultly.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
— Paul the Apostle

Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
  








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