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Mon Jul 01, 2013 5:43 pm
StoneHeart says...



Oh, and p.s: crossing half the world isn't a problem for the Derns . . . they've been planning this for years anyway.
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Mon Jul 01, 2013 5:56 pm
kayfortnight says...



Oh, okay. That makes more sense. As for routes, would they go through the Panama canal to get to the Atlantic? It'd be faster, but they'd have to cross through either the wastelands or Senetra, depending on how far each extends into Central America, exposing themselves to enemy fire or attack by magical beasts. Or they could go under South America, which would take longer and mean spending a long time in close proximity to the wasteland. If they sail from one of their Asian ports they'd have to sail around Africa, with the same problems with wasteland and speed. Basically, their route choice depends on how much they value speed. They could also take multiple of the above options so they don't have to wate time transferring their army between ports. Of course, we can always decide this part later; it's just something to think about.
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Wed Jul 03, 2013 2:02 pm
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Okay, so mind you that I've worked on this story world a bit . . .

I had planned that the Panama canal would exist (though that wouldn't make too much sense considering Teddy Roosevelt never existed), and that would be the route they'd take. Speed to get into position would be vital, if they didn't get into position in time then the Senetrans and Kyromese would have time to get together and combine fleets . . . making the Derns job VERY hard.
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Wed Jul 03, 2013 8:36 pm
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@Aquestioning that first post would be great!

@KatKage . . . if you could get your profiles up and have a first post done, then I could do my next post :P
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Wed Jul 03, 2013 8:45 pm
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Hey! I will sooner or later lol. And I will make my second character soon.
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Wed Jul 03, 2013 9:51 pm
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Great! :D
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Thu Jul 04, 2013 7:17 am
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I will try to do the next profile tomorrow, and the post in two days.
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Sat Jul 06, 2013 12:05 am
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Good!

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@KatKage . . . waiting on you guys :P
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Sun Jul 07, 2013 5:28 pm
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OKAY GUYS! POST! Come on. . . .

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@kayfortnight

I just need a couple more posts before I can post again (oh, and if everyone could let me know where there character's are (in normal earth terms) it would help me a lot in organization).
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Sun Jul 07, 2013 5:39 pm
umaima says...



I was actually waiting for others...
i wanted my character to meet someone. Anyone?
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Sun Jul 07, 2013 5:43 pm
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Well, where exactly is she (in normal earth terms). Major Magical Earth cities have corresponding major cities on our earth.
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Sun Jul 07, 2013 5:50 pm
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Senatra
Anywhere in Senatra
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Sun Jul 07, 2013 5:53 pm
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Eastern Seaboard then.
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kayfortnight says...



Mine's also with the Senetran army. Eastern Seaboard again?
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Sun Jul 07, 2013 5:57 pm
maleficent says...



Yeah, I sort of lost track of what was happening with all of the geographical stuff x)
I'll read the couple of posts after my first ones and get something up :]

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