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Tue May 14, 2024 7:51 pm
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soundofmind says...



if it gives anyone comfort like 30 of these characters will be in the background and not have major POV roles or anything
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Sun May 19, 2024 2:47 am
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herbalhour says...



do u guys want some peace offerings of cheese
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urbanhart says...



yis, our main cast of pov characters is a far more reasonable 16/∞ ☺️

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KateHardy says...



You guys seem well prepared xD I'm sure that's an understatement lol. Good Luck!!
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NadyaStatham says...



Anotha ship over here! Ahoy there me mateys, good to see ya. ^^ Watch out for tha sharks when ya set sail, those lots are very devious. Here's a bottle of rum for tha journey, all the best!
  





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THANK YOU FELLOW SAILOR OF THE SEAS, AMAYASTATHAM. THIS IS CAPTAIN SOUNDO SPEAKING. MAY YE TRAVERSE THESE WATERS WITH BRAVERY AND SKILL. I TAKE THIS RUM AND I SHALL USE IT TO FUEL ME SAILING PROWESS
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Tue May 28, 2024 7:03 am
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KateHardy says...



Double the word count on day one xD I was expecting nothing less! Looking forward to following along with the craziness! Good Luck!
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Tue May 28, 2024 7:05 am
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soundofmind says...



Hehehehehehhe
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Ley says...



Ahhh! As Kate said, so many words in just a few posts? Amazing. Legendary. Although, I'm not at all surprised! xD Keep on going strong, I can't wait to keep reading along. Good luck fellow sea-bearers!
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Roxanne says...



What a fine ship I see here! Hardly started and so many miles you lot have traveled, you've some destination in mind! I be sailing with me pearl and 216 barrels of rum, so if you ever run out, give a shout, and i'll be sure to pay you a visit again, savvy :D
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Carina says...



hello fellow sea farers, thank u for ur kind words. would u like a rosemary lemonade and a lawn chair while we watch da sunset
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soundofmind says...



hwheehEHEhehehEheh
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Spearmint says...



Yes please. Rosemary lemonade sounds delish :3

Also, oh my gosh. You all are writing a full-on novel over here with main characters, supporting characters, and extras. XD Great job so far!!

Promotion into the king's council meant he could become a permanent fixture on the palace walls.

Ah yes, a permanent fixture, like that wall sconce over there. What a lovely occupation. xD

"Lieutenant is just so boring, though," Fonzi said, putting his hands on his hips. "There's no spice. Not as exciting as being a finger."

LOL. Excellent banter, and also descriptions !! Everything feels so colorful and real in my head :D

And he wanted to believe they were still friends.

And lines like this. What they hint at. Ahhh such skilled writing :3

A fluttering of wings came from the window, and Shane glanced up, setting down his quill pen.

Hmm now that name sounds familiar ;D

It felt like being among them, but invisibly. Community in loneliness. Connection without rejection.

Omg. This captures the feeling of watching crowds so well.

Another one for the drawer that was steadily growing fuller and fuller and threatening to spill into the rest of his life.

So poetic :O

Shrimp, demanding pets with a loud mrow. Shane smiled, stroking behind the cat's ears as he cuddled him up to his chest.

Awww Shrimp!!

"On the plus side, we don't have to worry about any of these," Shane said, tapping the sea serpent on the cover. "They can't fit in our fountains."

Hahaha I just got a mental image of a sea serpent casually hanging out in a fountain-

"Ewwwwwwwwwwwww," a nasally voice pitched from behind him.

At the same time, Alan and Lara turned their heads, coming face-to-face with a complete stranger who looked how they sounded.

XDD I think this stranger will be quite entertaining >.>

If anything, it will be a highlight of someone's day to witness your proposal. Knowing you, I'm sure it'll be a touching moment for whoever is present. I wish you both well for your future together."

ToT I'm already scared that it'll go wrong. Things have been going a little too well for a suspicious reader as myself ^^'

"I dust off their gold coins in their money dungeon."

Yep, yep, gotta keep the gold coins shiny and satisfied. Wouldn't want them trying to escape the dungeon.

Reading this feels so fluid and natural :3 Fantastic writing, you all!!
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SilverNight says...



AJHDKJSADSH @Spearmint you're reading our madness so thoughtfully and appreciatively thank you ;-;

Hmm now that name sounds familiar ;D


waaaaaaaaaat? noooooooooo it's definitely not that guy but with a cat and alive parents c:
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Carina says...



mint this rp review is FABULOUS and you are officially our first reader to our insanity rp with characters we've been developing together the past 9ish months. thank u for ur commentary i am thoroughly amazed

also i forgot to reply to your pm because i doth sucketh but THANK U FOR THE WORD COUNTER WEBSITE its so helpful and u are fr the bestest :))
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