Greek Mythology in Poetry, that's interesting. I hope you're doing a poem(s) related to Daughter of War too. No pressure ^^ I'll be back to check out your poems, all the best @Leya !
“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni “Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter “ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
Omg, Ley!! This is amazing. The ending stanza is chef’s kiss. The use of parentheses to change the meaning is a really cool technique ^^
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“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni “Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter “ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
this line!! "but her heart strings (thin)." amazing i loved the rhyming-- it made it fun to sound out Hera's poem in my head! the colors and images are also lovelyyy. awesome start to NaPo, Ley!! ^-^
This theme is epic!! I love the Greek Mythology poems, even more now I'm reading DoW . 'till now, Hera's poem is my favourite, the amount of chills packed within its lines is just amazing!!
These were autumn mornings, the time of year when kings of old went forth to conquest; and I, never stirring from my little corner in Calcutta, would let my mind wander over the whole world. — Rabindranath Tagore, The Cabuliwallah
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