I've just posted the first chapter of my new fantasy novel - Paralleled, I would really appreciate it if you can review it. Feel free to be harsh, I want honest opinions.
Thanks!
The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep. ~Robert Frost
@defiantAuthoress , your review is complete! I do not read fan-fiction, so this was an interesting review for me. Thank you for sharing that, my friend.
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