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Sun Sep 11, 2011 7:49 am
ChocolateMoonLight says...



Review Bar is OPEN NOW!!!

Fill in your requests.

Hey! Guys

So as the forum says I'm here to review all your requests. Anything you want... (only from the topics I've listed below. Don't worry sometimes exceptions will be made :D)
And no need to beg I'll do them for FREE!!! (yeah, I know I'm great..:pirate3:)
Don't get too angry though if I don't do them fast 'cause well, I'm a student and I have homework to do, tests to give and do some writing too...

Poetry

Dramatic Poetry
Narrative Poetry
Other Poetry

Sorry but I'm not really great with Lyric Poetry so you might as well not ask...

Short Stories

Action/Adventure Short Stories
Fanfiction Short Stories
Fantasy Short Stories
Romantic Short Stories
General Fiction Short Stories

Novels

Action/Adventure Novels
Fan-Fiction Novels
Romantic Novels
General Fiction Novels

Okay, so this is the basic list of the work that I'll review for sure and as I said exceptions will be made sometimes. So, if you have any requests, just post them here and I'll see what I can do.

I'm not really good with advanced critiques so Don't Ask!

These are some of the reviews I'v done before- topic86485.html#p905437
topic84504.html#p888706
topic81599.html#p868541
topic86856.html#p909630

So after reading these reviews I'm pretty sure you have good idea about what kind of reviews I do. So go on, post your requests here and I'll try to do them asap!!!

Thanks a lot in advance to whoever in need of a review and posts here... :)

Spoiler! :
If you like the review I've given and if it helps you, and you wanna repay me.(I'm doing it for free but if you still want to..) Well I would really like that.. :D You can repay me by reviewing my work, befriending me, leaving a post on my wall or donating points. Anything you want, I won't complain :|
Spoiler! :
Checkout the different shades of sunset...
topic84708.html


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Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:37 pm
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Audy says...



Hello Chocolate,

I would like some feedback on a short poem of mine. Any advice on how to improve would be welcomed, so go as tough as you'd like. ^^ I really appreciate this.

post912753.html#p912753




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Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:07 am
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ChocolateMoonLight says...



Audy, done!!!
Spoiler! :
Checkout the different shades of sunset...
topic84708.html


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Sun Sep 18, 2011 10:37 am
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UrbanNomad says...



Hi there,
if you want to review my poem
post916429.html?hilit=clouds#p916429

it is called "Clouds" and is about writers block
Thanks, Oliver




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Sun Sep 18, 2011 11:44 am
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ChocolateMoonLight says...



Hey Ollie! (I can call you that, right?)

Review done!!! :-)
Spoiler! :
Checkout the different shades of sunset...
topic84708.html


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