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381 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1144
Reviews: 381
Mon Jul 25, 2011 5:04 pm
Fand says...



So, I'm looking to get back into the reviewing game. It was one of my favorite parts of being on YWS back in the day, especially since it was always my dream to become an editor. Want me to review your shtuff? Here's what you can expect, by format:

POETRY:
    Line by line analysis.
    Correction of grammar, punctuation, and spelling, if necessary.
    Analysis of the efficacy of your images.
    Discussion of language used (denotation v. connotation).
    Suggestions, with explanations.

SHORT STORIES:
    Correction of grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
    Character analysis and suggestions.
    Thematic commentary.
    Discussion of language use (denotation v. connotation).
    Plot analysis and suggestions.
    Summary of personal reactions with explanations.

NOVELS:
    Everything listed under short stories; however, note that I don't always review novels.

WHAT NOT TO EXPECT:
    One line reviews.
    Wholly reactionary reviews.
    I will not review novels if they do not hold my interest or are too error-filled.
    Blind praise for anything that isn't stellar and publication-ready.
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Points: 5391
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Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:19 pm
Priceless says...



Hi,
Please review the first chapter of my novel (romance). post889219.html#p889219 Thank you :)
We're all a little weird. And life's a little weird. And when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.
  





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370 Reviews



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Points: 20503
Reviews: 370
Wed Jul 27, 2011 4:59 am
empressoftheuniverse says...



Hey can you review my poem My Father?
Thanks in advance.
Naked I came from my mother's womb, and naked I will depart.
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