Young Writers Society

It seems I've neglected my good old reviewing habits. D:

I Review: Short stories, chapter works, poetry and all art and photography.

-For short stories, I'm welcome to any genre really. Although, if it's fan-fiction, I may not be as savvy to what you're writing about. (Just a heads up.)

-For chapter works, I'm also open to most genres. Although, I do tend to feel a bit numb when it comes to historical fiction.

-For poetry, I'm usually pretty open to anything you have. But be aware, I'm not always so hip to the abstract stuff.

-For art & photography, I will take anything and everything you give me! I love to critique all art pieces.

What to expect of my reviews: I tend to give reviews no less than four paragraphs in length. I try to be as in depth as I can get. For art and photography pieces, the length of my reviews may vary, but I will never leave quality to neglect! So don't worry. For short stories and chapter works, I will always include more or less of the following:

-Likes and dislikes
-Nitpicks of spelling errors and/or other miniscule things!
-Questioning of certain phrases & character dialogue
-My opinions of how the piece can or may be improved
-Opinion of plots and/or settings
-etc.

Post your links below, please. Thank you!

Hello, I guess I'm going to be the first one to answer this thread...

Hope you like romance, since I really need someone to review my short story.

Here's the link----> topic76466.html

Oh, and the story is split up in two parts. The link is for the first part, but there's also a link on the first part for the second part. If you don't want to do the second one, it's fine.

Thanks in advance!

-Other One

I'd love it if you'd review my piece. There are some things in the author's notes that I'd love for you to concentrate on.

1 | The Girl in the White Box - topic82336.html

It's the first chapter to my Scifi/Fantasy novel. Enjoy! =D

Hey! I thought I'd go ahead and ask if you'd like to review the next scene.

2 | Wicked Medicine - topic82614.html

Hey if you could take a look at this, that'd be great.
-> post874348.html#p874348
Thank you!

I feel like I should try and open this back up again. Hit me with what ch'ou got.

Hiya Smylin,

I would love a review on this: topic87688.html

Also, if you want me to review something in turn, let me know.

Thanks!
Sare

Hi there,
if you want to review my poem
post916429.html?hilit=clouds#p916429

it is called "Clouds" and is about writers block [genre narrative poem]
Thanks, Oliver

Hi there,
Could you please review part two of my novel as no-one seems to be looking at it:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post915763.html#p915763
Part one is here as well:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post915574.html#p915574

Thanks

Hey Twinny! Do you think you can take a look at these two poems for me?

Dream on

Shattered flutes and wasted whiskey

Thank you! You will get a cookie and.. and.. yeah, just the cookie.

Could you review this for me please? It's a short story .

I'd really appreciate a review on my Prologue for a novel I'm going to be writing, titled Atlantis It's a sci-fantasy story, which I hope you like!

Hey, I've been doing quite a bit of work on my novel, Magnificent, This World. I am now at nine chapters, but have only posted three on this site. It would be great if you could review the first one. Hey, if you want to read the others as well that's fine. Whatever works. Keep on writing.


--Maya


http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=89296

Here it is again, for good measure.

Please review one of my works. Thanks(: