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Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:44 am

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SporkPunk says...

Taffy! Wanna check out my first poem...? Nah, who am I kidding? I know you want to.

Hahaha

it began with a lump in the throat

Thanks so much!

~Sporky

Grasped by the throat, grasped by the throat. That's how I feel about love. That it's not worth it.

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Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:09 pm

XChangeX says...

Ambush

Critique ruthlessly

How can I be better?

XO Change

The only constant in our lives is Change.

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He will wipe every tear from their eye. There will be no more mourning or death or pain. There will be no more crying for the old way of things has gone away.

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Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:10 pm

ArcticMonkey says...

Done, Rae, anyone else?

Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.

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Tue Aug 31, 2010 3:48 pm

austenite says...

Could you review the first chapter of my new novel, Missing? Many thanks! topic68915.html

I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
Oscar Wilde

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Tue Aug 31, 2010 5:32 pm

retrodisco666 says...

topic68942.html

If you would review it would be much appreciated.

'I have loved to the point of madness, which for me is the only true way to love'
~Francoise Sagan

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Tue Aug 31, 2010 9:38 pm

lilgreendots says...

Hi Tam,

I just posted my first story so will you please review it for me topic68959.html.

-lilgreendots

Incarceron is a prison like no other
It gives life
It deals death
It Watches All

Incarceron
By: Catherine Fisher

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Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:26 am

ArcticMonkey says...

I'm done with all three. Anyone else?

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Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:11 am

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Futuristic says...

Well, I could use more reviews for http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic68944.html if you don't mind. Am working on Chap. Two, but want to make sure Chap. One is straight before I post the next one. Would appreciate any critique you could provide. Thanks in advance

There are those that live in the past. Those who focus on the present. I strive to be Futuristic.