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Yo,
I don't review grammar, and I don't comment on plot. I do look at sentence structure, internal consistency of the story's logic, narrative rhythm, and various nuances which may catch my eye.

genres:I will accept all fiction genres even if I hate them. No poetry pls.
length: The shorter the thing, the more likely I am to give it my whole attention. If I give up halfway, I'll honestly indicate this. You can try feeding me longer stuff by pieces.

Hi I would like a review for my story for which I have posted prologue, chapter 1 and 2.

A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
Chapter-2

You may just read the prologue and chapter 1. I want a review more fir chapter

Ok Shubhi,
I'll do it on the weekend!

Yo, Shubhi,
I've done what I can,I hope all this helps.

Thank you Napalmerski....Your reviews have helped me a lot. Thanks a lot. I have posted chapter 2 and 3 also if you want to read and don't mind reviewing!

OK Shubhi, but in a few days

Hey could you do this? Thanks! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post684136.html#p684136

Sure:) come the weekend, I'll review your story!
/and yours too, Shubi /

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