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Sun Nov 29, 2009 7:59 am
captain.classy says...



Classiest reviews around.

PLEASE NOTE:

Will review:
All Fiction
All Poetry

Will not review:
Novels when they are 5+ chapters in.
Fanfiction (Will review if I know what other story you're writing on. PM me)
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Mon Nov 30, 2009 4:50 am
Rascalover says...



Romantic fiction: Let Me Love You

this is chapter 12

Brief description of what has happened before: Isabella was in a car accident a few days later her boyfriend whose in a band breaks up with her. Jay, the boyfriend, has a cousin named Gary and that how Isabella met Jay. He is also in the band. He consoles Isabella cause theyre best friends and they slowly fall in love. He treats her to a weekend get away and gives her a promise ring to always love her. But now shes pregnant and she doesnt know what to do. whether to tell him or not.

link: topic54963.html

Please review thanks,
Tiffany
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Tue Dec 01, 2009 12:09 am
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All done! Thanks for the request.
  





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Tue Dec 01, 2009 11:23 pm
Rascalover says...



No problem but I have another :)

let Me Love You chapter 13

Brief description: Isabella and Gary have fallen in love after she was in a car accident and her boyfriend dumped her. Shes pregnant and doesnt want to tell him but in chapter twelve ends up telling him, this is his reaction.

Romantic Fiction

Link: topic55152.html

Please and thank you,
Tiffany
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Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:30 pm
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Tue Dec 08, 2009 3:39 pm
Young gun says...



Thanks for the last review.Could I bother you with this one too?

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Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:01 pm
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Hey! I hope you could check out my story Of Loss and Love, it's a romantic so I'm not sure if that's okay. There are seven chapters so far, I know that's kinda long but I would really love to hear your take on the story. Here's the link for chapter 1:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html
Thank you, I really appreciate it!
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Tue Dec 08, 2009 11:39 pm
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Of course! I will be reading these over the next few days and comment on the seventh chapter as soon as I'm finished!
  





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Tue Dec 15, 2009 12:20 am
Shearwater says...



Ahhh Classy! will you review my poem?
I want to know what you think :)
topic55634.html
Thanks a bunch, friend.

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Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:37 am
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I loved your poem! Thanks for the request. I was getting bored!
  





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Wed Dec 23, 2009 1:25 am
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No one else?! But I'm bored. Haha
  





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Wed Dec 23, 2009 8:21 pm
Lena.Wooldridge says...



Classy... Do this one for me. : )

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Thanks, it's nice and short

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Sat Dec 26, 2009 11:47 am
afeefah says...



Hi!

Could you review my srtory please? There's quite a few chapters and it's not quite finished.

topic46148.html

Thanks! :)

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