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Thu Mar 13, 2008 2:41 am
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Wolf says...



(Okay. This is an edit of my original post. In the original, I had a goal: to get a third blue star. Now, I simply want to review.)

What I critique:
Mostly, I critique fiction, usually fantasy or 'Other fiction'. I've never really tried Action/Adventure or Science Fiction before, but I'm willing to.
Same goes for Romance. I'm fine with that genre -- although it isn't my favourite -- so long as it hasn't got any sex scenes or anything.

I can do poetry, just not very well. I'm willing to try Scripts.

What I'm strongest in:
Unless tons of other people already have, I'm more than happy to do an in-depth critique for you. I'll point out grammatical errors, too.

I can also do critiques for wider aspects such as characters, plot, and whatnot. I'm not sure how adept I am at this, though.

Bottom line: please specify what kind of critique you want for your piece. I'm happy to do a "full crit" (pointing out grammar -- line by line, I guess you could say -- and focusing on larger aspects as well) for you.

"Full Edits"
For those who find the term unfamiliar, it's when I print out your piece and make changes myself in pen, then scan it onto the computer and post it on YWS. I'm fine to do one of these, preferably not with long stories, though.

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I have only about 30 - 40 mins. on YWS a day (since I'm half-grounded) so I should get one piece a day done.

In case I was incoherent above, here is what you can ask for:

- a critique for any genre of fiction, so long as there is no explicit sexual content.
- a critique on any genre of poetry.
- a critique for a Script.

And the types of crits:

- line-by-line/grammar/in-depth
- opinions and tips/advice on larger aspects of the story (i.e, characterization, plot etc.)
- a "full crit"
- a "full edit"

(But I can do a full crit and a full edit in the same review, if necessary.)


Post Away! :D

- Camille

PS. All the posts up until JFW1415's on page two are from the original post here.
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Thu Mar 13, 2008 8:59 am
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Rydia says...



I'd love a critique on A Moonlit Stroll. Thanks!
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Thu Mar 13, 2008 1:47 pm
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strawberrywine says...



Hi,
I liked someone else to crtic my story Diary. It's under non-fiction.

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Thu Mar 13, 2008 2:11 pm
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aestar101 says...



I need a couple more people to critique on The Reason. Its in Other Fiction.
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Wolf says...



Great! :)
I'm going up to the country today, but I'll be back in time to get those critiques done for you guys.
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Thu Mar 13, 2008 3:55 pm
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BigBadBear says...



Hey, Wolf! I need some help with HarborVille Prologue if you can get the chance. Thanks.

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Thu Mar 13, 2008 10:16 pm
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JFW1415 says...



Awesome! :P

Um...anything of mine? :P I guess 'For Matty' or 'Reality' in Other, or 'All Eyes On Us' in Romance. :P

I will love you forever and ever if you review anything of mine!

*Offers cookies as bribes*

Good luck!

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Sureal says...



Hey-hey Wolf. ^_^

If you're looking for stuff to review, I'd love one for Chapter One of The Broken.
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Wolf says...



So sorry I haven't reviewed these yet, but I've been away. I'll start now, though!
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Aedomir says...



I know you will be busy with the others, but the recent part of my novel somewhat lacks reviews...

Please see it here

Thanks! You deserve that shiny blue star =P
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GingerLizzy says...



Could you critique anything at all of mine?

I'm not so fussed, but perhaps one of my poems would be best?

Tarr, lovey.

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Fri Mar 14, 2008 8:56 pm
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Wolf says...



Okay, thanks! :)

So far, I've done: A moonlit stroll; Diary, EDITED; and The Reason (part 1).
Next up: HarborVille Prologue; Reality; The Broken - Chapter One.

And then Aedomir's piece and then something of Ginger's.

Sorry for the delay, but keep those pieces coming!
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Aedomir says...



Thnaks Wolf, we all love you!
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BigBadBear says...



Here is my I Think I'm In Love #4 that you asked for!

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Jennafina says...



I would love a critique on Benedict's Goodbye. Thanks, Wolf! You're getting close to that next star. :)
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