Young Writers Society

I look for little defects in your shoes that may cause you to trip up later.

What I look at: I review all types of shoes with with any tag rating. My specialties are in the area of novels and short stories, but I will try my hand at anything.
Disclaimer: I will try anything, but there is a minute chance that I may get triggered by something and have to quit. Upon such an unfortunate event, you will be PMed an apology message.

What I look for:
PLOT
1. Trailing shoelaces-when the pace drags just a little too much
2. Cracks-when the plot/pace is a little disconnected and choppy
3. Soleless shoes-when the pace is rushed a bit too much and the main part is left behind

DETAILS
1. Unpolished surfaces-when the piece could use a little editing and basic touchup.
2. Unmatching shoelaces-when a few inconsistencies ruin the overall effect
3. Leaks-when the phrasing gets a bit off and Grammer mistakes slip in through the holes

What a review includes: You may order either a general review or a specialized review.

GENERALIZED REVIEW
A generalized review will look for all the issues mentioned above, and go through solutions with you. It also comes with high praise for the places you did wonderfully on.

SPECIALIZED REVIEW
A specialized review grants you the freedom to pick and chose what parts you want criticism on and which parts you don't. When I review, I will pay special attention to any issues you bring up.

All reviews are free and will come with positivity, I promise.

Thank you for visiting your local Shoe Inspector!

hey kaia! if you could take a look at this poem of mine, that would be great! <3

Hi, momo! Your review should arrive by the end of this week. Thanks for your order!

momonster wrote:hey kaia! if you could take a look at this poem of mine, that would be great! <3

I read your poem, it's great!!! drift boss

Hey kaia :3 could you please review my dedication collection? (if thats not too much of a burden for you.)

Could you share a link @teatime? Also, it may be a while because of school and life but I'll try to help you out when I can

@KaiaJersaga here ya go! the dedication collection (updates with time)

also i have two i's in my name :3

Oops I didn't check to make sure I'd tagged you. Sorry. Will get to it when I get a chance