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Young Writers Society


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23 Reviews


Gender: Other
Points: 1966
Reviews: 23
Sat May 01, 2021 12:58 am
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blueca says...



Hello, hello!

Here's how it goes:
You get: A shiny review on your lovely piece
I get: Points >:) (At no cost to you, of course)

I will review:
    -Poetry
    -Songs and song lyrics (I can review the musical elements)
    -Visual art
    -Short stories

I will not review:
    -Novels
    -Novel chapters
    -Romantic or sexual content no matter the medium
    -Works with more than 5 reviews already

What to expect and other conditions:

My reviews are typically 200-250 words. You can request a review that focuses on a specific element (characters, grammer, themes, etc). Otherwise, I will review as follows.

For lyrics and poetry, I will usually focus on meter and thematic content.
For short stories, I will usually focus on themes, grammar, and dialouge.
For visual art, I will usually focus on colors, techniques, and balance.

You can request multiple reviews at once.

I will aim to fill requests in 2-4 days.

I can't wait to read what you send my way!
i can't beleive it's not gender!
artim/artos/artims/arself
my name is the same as my user, or you can call me jan Laso!

romance makes me uncomfortable, please don't.
  





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42 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 12
Reviews: 42
Thu May 20, 2021 12:21 pm
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EsmerayaRose says...



Hi, BrokenHeartsAri here to leave a poem that needs some reviews and possibly alike.
Unamed

Step into her shoes
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~
she/they
  





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222 Reviews


Gender: Female
Points: 15144
Reviews: 222
Tue May 09, 2023 4:13 pm
AkuRashomon says...



Hi, would you review and read my newest short story called on The Rooftop? That would help a lot.
rashomon go brr

she/her


used to be loveissourgrapes
  








It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien