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Sun Apr 11, 2021 12:28 am
starbean says...



What I will review:
Poetry
Novel/Chapter
Short Story
Fantasy

What I won't review
Horror
Satire
Politics


Anything Else

Ask me


If it has more than four reviews, then I can't. Exceptions occasionally made.
Last edited by starbean on Tue Apr 13, 2021 6:25 pm, edited 1 time in total.
she/her————pro-life————Christian————climber of rocks, trees, and rooftops----reader of poetry, Antoine de Saint Exupery, Pam Munoz Ryan, and Anthony Doerr
"She is too fond of books, and it has turned her brain." -Louisa May Alcott
  





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Sun Apr 11, 2021 3:37 pm
NivedaJames22 says...



@hannah0528

Hey!

If you're free, would you mind reviewing my new poem?

Its a funny poem about an argument between a crepe and a pancake.

The Crepe and the Pancake

-NivedaJames22 (:
Clumsy, clumsy, clumsy, she berated herself.

"To friendship!" they had toasted, before downing their respective drinks and acquiring thick chocolatey moustaches.
  





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Sun Apr 11, 2021 4:27 pm
starbean says...



Okay! I will. Today, I am spending the night at my grandmas house so I probably won't get it to you until around tomorrow afternoon.

Edit: I just reviewed it!
she/her————pro-life————Christian————climber of rocks, trees, and rooftops----reader of poetry, Antoine de Saint Exupery, Pam Munoz Ryan, and Anthony Doerr
"She is too fond of books, and it has turned her brain." -Louisa May Alcott
  





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Sun Apr 11, 2021 4:54 pm
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Hey! @chikara and I wrote a poem the other day, and I was hoping if you could drop a review? Thanks! nostaligia i've kept under my bed
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Mon Apr 12, 2021 5:43 pm
starbean says...



Okay! Of course!
she/her————pro-life————Christian————climber of rocks, trees, and rooftops----reader of poetry, Antoine de Saint Exupery, Pam Munoz Ryan, and Anthony Doerr
"She is too fond of books, and it has turned her brain." -Louisa May Alcott
  





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Mon Apr 12, 2021 5:49 pm
starbean says...



And done! Hope it was helpful. Please request more reviews!
she/her————pro-life————Christian————climber of rocks, trees, and rooftops----reader of poetry, Antoine de Saint Exupery, Pam Munoz Ryan, and Anthony Doerr
"She is too fond of books, and it has turned her brain." -Louisa May Alcott
  





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Wed Apr 14, 2021 3:13 pm
NivedaJames22 says...



@hannah0528

Hey!

If you're free, would you mind reviewing my new chapter? It's the fourth chapter of "The Story Of An Introvert"

The Story Of An Introvert-4

-NivedaJames22 (:
Clumsy, clumsy, clumsy, she berated herself.

"To friendship!" they had toasted, before downing their respective drinks and acquiring thick chocolatey moustaches.
  





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Gender: Female
Points: 2211
Reviews: 93
Wed Apr 14, 2021 3:26 pm
starbean says...



Of course, Niveda!
she/her————pro-life————Christian————climber of rocks, trees, and rooftops----reader of poetry, Antoine de Saint Exupery, Pam Munoz Ryan, and Anthony Doerr
"She is too fond of books, and it has turned her brain." -Louisa May Alcott
  








I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy