Hey Sarah I would appreciate if you could review the Prologue and first chapter of my novel and provide me with some tips on improving my writing.The Seven Heavenly Kings Revamped
Teach a man to fish, he eats for a day. Don't teach a man to fish, you eat for a day. He's a grown man. Fishing's not that hard. — Ron Swanson (Parks and Rec)
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